As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of human to think for themselves is deteriorating.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
I disagree with that the ability of humans to think for themselves will deteriorate as technology developes. Growing advanced tech give us chance to consider various fact and people are natural greedy existence. Therefore, it is hard to generalize only technology make people not to think for themselves. The following essay will argue why it is hard to neglect pros part of technology which help people to increase their thinking ability.
Admittedly, solving problems in society decrease the time of ordinary person to discuss about their daily routine. first, densely specified skills in engineering field definitely provide comfortable lifestyle so most people might satisfy within it and stop to increase the level of ability to think. In addition, as technician move forward far from ours and do something in their major, the number of technologies we cannot understand decrease. however, it is hard to admit that devising solution deteriorate human's thinking ability. The following are the reasons.
First, as people solve more and more problems on technology, people need to come up with more advanced solution because the most easiest must be solved first. For example, Let's think about the history of communications method. it is hard to define the beginning of it, let's consider about letter's advent and delivering system. our ancestor wrote what they want to say in the paper, and the delivery person make a delivery over weeks or few days. After then, Mr.Bell invented the phone-calling system and people do not need to wait for a long time. they can just push numbers and say what they wanted to say. This developement follows to cellphone. we can easily come up with the ideas and implementation of letter system. however, what about cellphone? we don't know what the cellphone works internally.
In addition, mankind are naturally greedy existence. No matter how much degree technology developed, people have wish to live better life. people always treat themselves they would be happy if they solve the most critics problem in current situation. however, In reality, solving those problem doesn't usually guarantee the satisfied life. what if we show latest technologies such as cellphone, laptop, or communication systems to persons who lived in 100 years ago? they might be shocked and think they will be happy if they have it.
In conclusion, as people solve many problems, there are two type of people; who are interested in those naïve ideas and techs or not. I partially agree with people's ability to think for themselves are deteriorating as developement of technologies, there are also some cases technology help people to think about themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2253.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21527777778 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76300760657 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548611111111 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9170583477 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4444444444 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.51851851852 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239261844048 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580572482028 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717563441383 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143945339927 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643655233246 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.