As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of human to think for themselves is deteriorating.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of human to think for themselves is deteriorating.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

I disagree with that the ability of humans to think for themselves will deteriorate as technology developes. growing advanced tech give us chance to consider various fact and people are natural greedy existence. therefore, it is hard to generalize only technology make people not to think for themselves. the following essay will argue why it is hard to neglect pros part of technology which help people to increase their thinking ability.  Admittedly, solving problems in society decrease the time of ordinary person to discuss about their daily routine. first, densely specified skills in engineering field definitely provide comfortable lifestyle so most people might satisfy within it and stop to increase the level of ability to think. in addition, as technician move forward far from ours and do something in their major, the number of technologies we cannot understand decrease. however, it is hard to admit that devising solution deteriorate human's thinking ability. the following are the reasons.     First, as people solve more and more problems on technology, people need to come up with more advanced solution because the most easiest must be solved first. for example, let's think about the history of communications method. it is hard to define the beginning of it, let's consider about the advent of letter and delivering system. our ancestor wrote what they want to say in the paper, and the delivery person make a delivery over weeks or few days. after then, Mr.Bell invented the phone-calling system and people do not need to wait for a long time. they can just push numbers and say what they wanted to say. this developement follows to cellphone. we can easily come up with the ideas and implementation of letter system. however, what if you think about cellphone? we don't know what the cellphone works internally.     In addition, mankind are naturally greedy existence. no matter how much degree technology developed, people have wish to live better life. people always treat themselves they would be happy if they solve the most critics problem in current situation. however, In reality, solving those problems doesn't usually guarantee the satisfied life. what if we show latest technologies such as cellphone, laptop, or communication systems to persons who lived in 100 years ago? they might be shocked and think they will be happy if they have it.   In conclusion, as people solve many problems, there are two type of people; who are interested in those naïve ideas and techs or not. I partially agree with the ability of people to think for themselves are deteriorating as developement of technologies, there are also some cases’ technology help people to think about themselves.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3055.0 2235.4752809 137% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.48619957537 5.05705443957 128% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.03471458608 2.79657885939 252% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549893842887 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 864.9 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 91.1313059851 60.3974514979 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.291666667 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95833333333 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138715176322 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534746976622 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052660290566 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0477886856407 0.150359130593 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675834073611 0.0667264976115 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 14.1392134831 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.36 12.1639044944 167% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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