The following is a recommendation from the personnel director to the president of Acme Publishing Company.
"Many other companies have recently stated that having their employees take the Easy Read Speed-Reading Course has greatly improved productivity. One graduate of the course was able to read a five-hundred-page report in only two hours; another graduate rose from an assistant manager to vice president of the company in under a year. Obviously, the faster you can read, the more information you can absorb in a single workday. Moreover, Easy Read costs only $500 per employee - a small price to pay when you consider the benefits to Acme. Included in this fee is a three-week seminar in Spruce City and a lifelong subscription to the Easy Read newsletter. Clearly, Acme would benefit greatly by requiring all of our employees to take the Easy Read course."
The author, the director to the boss of acme publishing company argues that all employees need to take the compatible read course to increase the productivity for their business. The evidences such as the cheaper price, successful examples of graduates seems enough for the conclusion to prove the incremental efficiency for the lecture. however, the author fails to substantiate the weakness points to take the course regarding speed of reading. The following essay will discuss the disadvantages and advantages on joining it as a participates.
Admittedly, without the sources the author mentioned in the paragraphs, there still are potential strong keys to grow productivity from taking the required course. the readability partially depends on the reader's speed and faster reader would lead the effective process on their given tasks. every significant determinations consider more possible options with a better information from the skills learned from the course and it perhaps cause the rise or improve each worker's ability to finish onerous problems when they face. however, the argument will be fruitful if the following disadvantages for the course are mentioned in the discussion.
The significant matter what the author assumed is generalizing special cases of graduates and expect the similar performances to the members of his company. understandably, the skills from the recommended course might influence the most effects to become a vice president in under a year, he must not reach to the conclusion it is the only key to achieve awesome successful. Rather than that, other factors such as wonderful communication abilities, follower ship, leadership must be took amount into it to analyze the reasons as being great person.
Furthermore, the author fails to explain the correlations between the copious of reading information and the level of understood knowledge. The readability and the memories for our brain has been limited even though the course probably rise a bit threshold of it. Therefore, when the reader increase the speed of reading, the mount of forgot information would be rose too. reading more concepts does not guarantee to develope the speed of memories. In addition, the author described a case for whom understand the 500 pages books in 2 hours. Although he finished the matter to read all the characters in a book, how much he absorb the concept and stories in it are mysterious.
Lastly, the cheaper cost are not the main option to decide whether the acme must all of employees to take the easy read course and it does not assure the quality of the it. Moreover, three weeks are short to learn useful knowledge to improve the productivity in their work and if the learner might not actively participated in the short period of course, then the time for 3 week will be wasteful. The attendees for the course can effectively use the same amount time more effectively with working in practical situation.
In conclusion, we have considered the pros and cons on the issues whether the company should make the easy read course as a need to every member. even if the reasons sounds logical to command them to do it, the author will strengthen his argument with dealing above situations and convince readers who believe in other sides of him.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 536 350
No. of Characters: 2696 1500
No. of Different Words: 273 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.812 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.03 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.77 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 203 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 152 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 100 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 72 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 33.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.978 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.312 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.604 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.073 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...incremental efficiency for the lecture. however, the author fails to substantiate the w...
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Line 1, column 547, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntages on joining it as a participates. Admittedly, without the sources the au...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...tivity from taking the required course. the readability partially depends on the re...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Every
...effective process on their given tasks. every significant determinations consider mor...
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Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
... learned from the course and it perhaps cause the rise or improve each workers abilit...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
... perhaps cause the rise or improve each workers ability to finish onerous problems when...
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Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...finish onerous problems when they face. however, the argument will be fruitful if the f...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are mentioned in the discussion. The significant matter what the author a...
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Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Understandably
...ormances to the members of his company. understandably, the skills from the recommended course...
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Line 9, column 553, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lyze the reasons as being great person. Furthermore, the author fails to expla...
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Line 13, column 376, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Reading
...f forgot information would be rose too. reading more concepts does not guarantee to dev...
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Line 13, column 627, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'absorbs'.
Suggestion: absorbs
...l the characters in a book, how much he absorb the concept and stories in it are myste...
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Line 13, column 680, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ncept and stories in it are mysterious. Lastly, the cheaper cost are not the m...
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Line 17, column 168, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...e and it does not assure the quality of the it. Moreover, three weeks are short to lea...
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Line 17, column 378, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...t period of course, then the time for 3 week will be wasteful. The attendees for the...
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Line 21, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
... read course as a need to every member. even if the reasons sounds logical to comman...
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Line 21, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ders who believe in other sides of him.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 55.5748502994 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2770.0 2260.96107784 123% => OK
No of words: 536.0 441.139720559 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16791044776 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.56307096286 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83466627614 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 204.123752495 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527985074627 0.468620217663 113% => OK
syllable_count: 851.4 705.55239521 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 16.0 8.76447105788 183% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1144887811 57.8364921388 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.909090909 119.503703932 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 23.324526521 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 5.70786347227 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.20758483034 171% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275573241009 0.218282227539 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691667398814 0.0743258471296 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667362845704 0.0701772020484 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129325767766 0.128457276422 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361478970858 0.0628817314937 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.3799401198 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 98.500998004 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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