As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The issue of whether or not people's dependence on technology to solve problems deteriorate their ability to think for themselves is a contentious one. While technology usage has its strengths and weaknesses, I believe that the growing dependence on technology does weaken the thinking ability.
First of all, technology has become an inevitable part of everyone's life and one of its critical usage in today's world is smart devices. I would like to point out that people are so involved in the smart devices that they forget about the world around them. For instance, I have noticed several people who could not live without their smartphones even for a minute. This level of addiction would deteriorate the individual at physical and mental levels.
Furthermore, people rely too much on technology for even quotidian tasks that their critical thinking ability gets corroded. For instance, they rely on calculators for performing a basic sum which they could solve in mind. Both common sense and personal experience have told us that if this kind of scenario continues, then people will not be able to proceed at all in the absence of technology.
Admittedly, usage of technology has prone to be advantageous and is omnipresent. This is true especially when technology helps to accomplish tasks faster but people should not always rely on technology. For instance, technology should not reduce one's ability to think instead it should help in keeping the mind sharper.
In conclusion, although the use of technology cannot be completely evicted out of everyday life, people must limit their dependence on it. In fact, we must understand that the primary purpose of technology is to assist us and not rule us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 280.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14642857143 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80758584291 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.6738934992 60.3974514979 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.928571429 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217089841849 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791497546863 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645475002869 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126865262058 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598565862898 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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