As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2457.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 503.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88469184891 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03148386613 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.389662027833 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 801.9 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 100.0 23.0359550562 434% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.337991257 60.3974514979 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 491.4 118.986275619 413% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 100.6 23.4991977007 428% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 49.0 7.80617977528 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346144814112 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225760292216 0.0831039109588 272% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136052759944 0.0758088955206 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225760292216 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136052759944 0.0667264976115 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.9 14.1392134831 367% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -30.02 48.8420337079 -61% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 42.3 12.1743820225 347% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.38706741573 135% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.0 11.2143820225 375% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 42.0 11.7820224719 356% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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