As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
technology becomes hot topic nowadays. people use technology for almost all of their activities. Some people argue that technology decreased human ability to think. I strongly disagree with the statement for two reasons.
First, advanced technology creates advanced problems. Consequently, advanced problem require new solution from human thinking ability. human ability to think tested with new problem. Until the end of the world, problem will never perish. almost every certain solution creates a new problem for the next generation. For instance, people nowadays have to think about data science, complex computation, and advanced mechanic while in the past, people just think how to eat, travel, and send messages.
Furthermore, technology helps human to think more fast and effective. technology aids human to think even more complex problem. The modern problem is far more complex than the old problem. modern problem often need exact prediction and calculation including consideration of many constraint or factor. modern mathematical computation helps people to solve a super complex mathematical problem with thousand probabilities and constraint. For examples, an electrical power generation needs a schedule to decide whether a generator being activated or maintenanced. An abundance of consideration and constraint are required to decide the decision. A mathematical tool like matlab or other computing software are needed to solve this such problem. Long short story, this technology aid supports human to think more complex.
In Conclusion, technology has improved much of human ability to think and solve more complex problem. human skill to problem-solving has increased since the advent of advanced technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 33.0505617978 15% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 256.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8125 5.05705443957 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94678345232 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6280845806 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.8571428571 118.986275619 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1904761905 23.4991977007 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.04761904762 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356588583788 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121870851193 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10179379564 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241130031293 0.150359130593 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334401324672 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.53 12.1639044944 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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