As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The discussion about whether technological development will certainly diminish the imagination power of people or not is a polemical one. While there are people on both sides of the argument,
I firmly disagree with the statement and believe that reliance on technology is not a hindrance to our intellectual thoughts although our life is getting easier and faster with the aid of modern science. This essay will focus on the points to bolster my position.
The workability of human being positively related to reliance on technology; it leads us to the area where we may widen our flexible thoughts rather than it acts as a barrier. For example, in the past decades, people traveled long distances by foot or by any manually controlled vehicles. However, after the great inventions like internal combustion engines reduced the sufferings of the human being to some extent. These vehicles powered by the combustion of fossil fuels; one day these non-renewable energies will be diminished if the process is being continued. So, this compels us to think another way of producing power which may drive the vehicles smoothly. This problem opens a large area for research that
arises mainly due to the dependence on technology.
Technological upgradation brought dramatic changes in the life of individuals; this also enhances the socio-economic development of the country. For Example, in the past century, if a person wants to do any type of case study, either it is scientific or any other, the process was time-consuming and daunting. However, today, technology has blessed us with some fruitful devices such as computers, internet facilities and so on, and the analysis becomes much easier and faster. For a developing country, like Bangladesh, online business is like a blessing; nowadays women are participating in these sectors profoundly. Involvement of woman in online also offline businesses not only enhance the nations economic growth but also make them self-reliant.
In conclusion, Technology has been unlocking different fields of research every single moment nevertheless it becomes a limitation to the intelligence of people.
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...ation to the intelligence of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 338.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3875739645 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0475167983 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612426035503 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0670794614 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.4 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153086624478 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454291988281 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282133219644 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0504372231094 0.150359130593 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463119641188 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.38706741573 120% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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