As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
In the 20th century the technological advancement have made possible to think beyond the basic human capabilities. The advancement like Machine learning or Artificial intelligence have improved selection an efficient way of doing things. This includes innovation of driverless car, Google search engine, detecting skin cancer by using a phone camera and a free software app. Such advancements have pushed limits of the human capabilities. These advancements are saving significant time which scientist or researches would spend in a lab to come up with a unique solution after thousands of failed attempts.
Use of automated softwares and hardware have reduced the human efforts and time. Tesla’s innovation in factory robotics automation have improved the manufacturing efficiency - reduced production time and resulted in less human errors. Automation software such as Python can talk to many hardware systems with computer and performs a a flawless work, which includes remotely performed medical surgeries.
The need of technology to solve quotidian tasks gives rise to start-up companies. Start-up such as gas fuel delivery, food delivery and app based car services such as Uber has improved the life of many people. These ideas and companies provides new employment, develops new opportunities and consumer markets. This overall improves the productivity and ameliorates the economical growth of the region in a larger scale.
Although there are many examples which delineate technology a reason for lethargy and which might have caused the rise of obesity in the modern society, there is a bright side which provides opportunities, employment and resolves work life balance problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...ware systems with computer and performs a a flawless work, which includes remotely ...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ware systems with computer and performs a a flawless work, which includes remotel...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...ware systems with computer and performs a a flawless work, which includes remotely ...
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Line 9, column 370, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...es the productivity and ameliorates the economical growth of the region in a larger scale....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 33.0505617978 12% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 256.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6796875 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00730637884 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6484375 0.4932671777 131% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6749878055 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.846153846 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 5.21951772744 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0791438449933 0.243740707755 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302309648621 0.0831039109588 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383061031422 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0466118412762 0.150359130593 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151753478381 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.