As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In recent centuries, humans have developed the technology very rapidly, and you may accept some merit of it, and you may see a distortion in society occured by it. To be lazy for human in some meaning is one of the fashion issues in thesedays. There are many symptoms and resons of it. However, I can not agree with the statement that the technology make humans to be reluctant to thinkng thoroughly.
Of course, you can see the phenomena of human laziness along with developed technology in some place. However, they would happen in specific condition, not general. What makes human to be laze of thinking is not merely technology, but the the tendency of human that they treat them as a magic stick and a black box. Not understanding the aims and theory of them couses the disapproval problems.
The most important thing to use the thechnology, regardless the new or old, is to comprehend the fundamental idea of them, and to adapt suit tech to tasks in need. Even if you recognize a method as a all-mighty and it is extremely over-spec to your needs, you can not see the result you want. In this procedure, humans have to consider as long as possible to acquire adequate functions. Therefore, humans can not escape from using their brain.
In addition, the technology as it is do not vain automatically, the is created by humans. Thus, the more developed tech and the more you want a convenient life, the more you think and emmit your creativity to breakthrough some banal method sarcastically.
Consequently, if you are not passive to the new tech, but offensive to it, you would not lose your ability to think deeply. Furthermore, you may improve the ability by adopting it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... thinking is not merely technology, but the the tendency of human that they treat them ...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... thinking is not merely technology, but the the tendency of human that they treat them ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...need. Even if you recognize a method as a all mighty and it is extremely over spe...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
... In addition, the technology as it is do not vain automatically, the is created ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'in addition', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.179640718563 0.240241500013 75% => OK
Verbs: 0.140718562874 0.157235817809 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0778443113772 0.0880659088768 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0838323353293 0.0497285424764 169% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0838323353293 0.0444667217837 189% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.104790419162 0.12292977631 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0209580838323 0.0406280797675 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7669723283 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0449101796407 0.030933414821 145% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0988023952096 0.0997080785238 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0269461077844 0.0249443105267 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00299401197605 0.0148568991511 20% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1687.0 2732.02544248 62% => OK
No of words: 296.0 452.878318584 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69932432432 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.287162162162 0.366273622748 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.219594594595 0.280924506359 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172297297297 0.200843997647 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128378378378 0.132149295362 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7669723283 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 219.290929204 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533783783784 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 54.3757269049 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5 23.380412469 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0866249515 59.4972553346 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4375 141.124799967 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 23.380412469 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.674092028746 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 40.4594594595 51.4728631049 79% => OK
Elegance: 0.990291262136 1.64882698954 60% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.512296351619 0.391690518653 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110927885022 0.123202303941 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0670271928519 0.077325440228 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.553626869162 0.547984918172 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171031321991 0.149214159877 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201316310058 0.161403998019 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111735509625 0.0892212321368 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.372466247258 0.385218514788 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0563012763655 0.0692045440612 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351008285519 0.275328986314 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553927939419 0.0653680567796 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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