People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
People's behavior can be defined as how distinct people react in certain instances in their life. For instance, if we consider a behavior of a child while everybody is around them then the child creates nuisance in order to be the centre of attraction otherwise if a child is alone then he/she would not react if they met a minor injury. As it is said that behavior of the person can be identified by the activities they have done in their childhood therefore it would not be wrong to almost admit the issue that people's behavior is largely determined by the forces not of their own making.
Firstly, the statement suits best for the sportsmen or sportswomen around the globe. Players are mostly encouraged and enthusiased by the audiences response according to how they play the game. It was all over the news when due to the unfortunate promulgation of the coronavirus audiences were not allowed to buy tickets for the match and the sports that were played in stadiums that had no audience, the exhiliration of the players were not visible through their body language. Therefore, their behavior eventually changed.
Secondly, for any movement to become popular it is essential that people of distinct backgrounds to rally around the city or town for the movement to become successful. Example of such movement is #blacklivesmatter where an african american person was killed by a police officer in America without any prior notice. This mishappening led to the million of people coming together in different countries be it America or Europe. People knew that they had been fighting against rasicm for a long time but it took a cost of one person's life for the matter to come out to the world. Hence, they could have rallied before too but they needed an external force so that they could react.
Thirdly, while the statement stands true for certain issues but there are other parameters where this does not stand along. Countries where people are not able to elect their own leaders, countries without any democratic power, in such countries the government does not tend listen the pleadings of the citizens. It is upto the govermental authorities what to do and what not to. Hence, here the behavior of government does not shift according to the force of the people.
Lastly, I would like to end the statement by saying that it might be possible that people's behavior is determined by the forces of other people but this is not true for every condition. Some people tend to believe in themselves rather than changing their attitudes for other people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'audiences'' or 'audience's'?
Suggestion: audiences'; audience's
...ostly encouraged and enthusiased by the audiences response according to how they play the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2129.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 437.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87185354691 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62889127502 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49885583524 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9640926461 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.277777778 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2777777778 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166939446182 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555935976803 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419302128559 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977545067909 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353362050971 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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