People s behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Human behavior is a conundrum of emotions and feelings that portray how a person is feeling. These behaviors are often times determined by the forces that are not controlled by the person himself. The events and the instances that a human being faces go about a long way in determining the behavior of an individual. Therefore, I agree with the statement that people's behavior is largely determined by the forces not of their own making.

A person comes to work in a sullen mood because he had a fight with his wife, or a person is irritated due to problems prevalent in his family. This would mean that the person would be reserved and would not mingle with his peers at work. This could be misinterpreted by the people as a person who is bombastic and pays too much heed towards himself. On the contrary, he is just agitated due to the events taking place in his life. The person cannot be put to blame for his behavior. Rather, an individual on the reciving end of such a morose behavior should understand the person's predicament behind such a behavior and help him overcome it. Instances like these, provide an evidence that a person's behavior is affected and controlled by the forces that are not of his own making.

Graduating college with distinction or the birth of your first child brings about immense joy to the person as well as his immediate family members. The feeling of jubilation and the behavior that accompanies it brings about a positive vibe for the individual as well as the people surrounding and interacting with him. A person who is part of a functional family, that take care of each other, or understand the situation a family member is facing keeps the overall enviornment of the family serene. The behavior of a such a family would always be jovial and affeable.

People usually are irritated or agitated towards people who show a behavior of arrogance, resentment, or are of a taciturn nature. Their overall behavior is looked upon with contempt and people refrain from interacting with them. People now a days judge an individual based upon their attitude and behavior towards others. Such an approach impairs a person from thinking about the fact that the individual who is in a sullen mood might be going through something unpleasent in his or her life. Instances that are not of his or her own making but that reflect upon the behavior of an individual.

Therefore, I believe that it is essential now that people do not look upon people with disgust because the behavior of an opposite person is inappropriate. On the contrary, a person should lend a helping hand to such indivduals who could possibly use some help to come out of such morbid situations.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...a morose behavior should understand the persons predicament behind such a behavior and ...
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Line 3, column 693, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... like these, provide an evidence that a persons behavior is affected and controlled by ...
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Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...rain from interacting with them. People now a days judge an individual based upon their at...
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Line 9, column 233, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...d a helping hand to such indivduals who could possibly use some help to come out of such morbi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, therefore, well, as well as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 469.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76332622601 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68594943316 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439232409382 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 712.8 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4270998867 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.545454545 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3181818182 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159420286381 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644253060832 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688511406143 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106907806722 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534198560664 0.0667264976115 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, therefore, well, as well as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments