People should question the rule of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
People should prefer to question the rule of authority rather than blindly following them. Without a doubt, there can be no rule that is perfect; there can always be a possibility of improvement. The authority can make rules that may seem right to them at the time of making, but it is possible that it turns out to be wrong. Therefore people should not be following a rule without being pragmatic about it unless its something that is made for their own good and the people have insufficient knowledge about its reasoning.
To begin with, no rule can be perfect; so people should always think twice before following any rule in the first place. For example, there has been a new rule that the government of India came up with: People should link their Adhar card, which is a new unique identity card for Indians, with their bank accounts. Even though this rule was made up to track down all the business transactions and try to secure everyone's data, It turned out to be skeptical as reports started coming out stating that some people got hacked and all of their money was stolen.
Furthermore, if a rule comes out, people should always question whether it's going to work in practical scenarios. Again, referring to the previous example, people found out about the technical flaws of such a nationally introduced identity system much later. If everyone would have asked: How will you make sure our personal information is safe and secured and cannot be exploited? then maybe the government would have had either made sure that there were no loopholes in the system before its launch, or discarded the rule altogether in the first place.
In contrast to the above-mentioned situations, there can be a situation where people simply aren't aware of how secure is their personal information. So by issuing the new identity card: Adhar card, the government has taken a great initiative for the people to have a unique identification system, rather than having multiple systems, just as the current identity security system in the USA: social security number. So without a doubt, by making the rule that everyone in India should have an Adhar card, the government has taken a much-needed decision for the people and such type of rules can be followed by the people without questioning it in a few scenarios.
In conclusion, It is always a good idea to ask the question: Is this rule of authority appropriate and helpful to everyone? If the answer is yes then certainly we can follow it. But if the answer is no then they have to take actions to make it right. However, sometimes people are incapable of knowing whats best for them and if they follow the rule of authority undoubtedly, it can be ultimately beneficial for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...possible that it turns out to be wrong. Therefore people should not be following a rule w...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a new unique identity card for Indians, with their bank accounts. Even though th...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: IT_IS[19]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
..., people should always question whether its going to work in practical scenarios. A...
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Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gain, referring to the previous example, people found out about the technical fla...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had asked'?
Suggestion: had asked
...identity system much later. If everyone would have asked: How will you make sure our personal in...
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Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Then
...fe and secured and cannot be exploited? then maybe the government would have had eit...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...trast to the above-mentioned situations, there can be a situation where people si...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
... can be a situation where people simply arent aware of how secure is their personal i...
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Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: ASK_THE_QUESTION[1]
Message: Use simply 'ask' instead.
Suggestion: ask
...conclusion, It is always a good idea to ask the question: Is this rule of authority appropriate ...
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ty appropriate and helpful to everyone? If the answer is yes then certainly we can...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...metimes people are incapable of knowing whats best for them and if they follow the ru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2263.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80467091295 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62247175539 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469214437367 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4239771935 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.722222222 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 5.21951772744 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279758901666 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113487858801 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108506161382 0.0758088955206 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181904928103 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560275708796 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.