People should question the rules of the authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
Every rule should be justifiable. Unless an autocratic rule is being made, people possess the right to get their questions answered. People should not accept their superiors decision passively, but should also think about the intricacies involved in the decision making.
Every decision made by the authority is based on their perspective and outlook. They may sometimes neglect or be oblivious to the repercussions of their decision and therefore the onus lies to the people for questioning them and make these authoritarians realize the ill-effect of their decisions. When people start enquiring about the rules, the policymakers are put under stress and therefore make prudent decisions, which cannot be challenged. We see this in our many political systems where the ruling party has an opposing party constantly challenging the former and thus keeping the system in good order. We are humans after all prone to err, we need our own kind to keep a check on ourselves.
We cannot have everyone as the decision makers, but everyone can get their voices heard to help themselves and their fellow companions. Silence is an instrument which can be used for both constructive and destructive means. Being equivocal and evasive is what authoritarians do to keep the people perplexed sometimes. Although, people can choose to remain silent or be disruptive and put forth their questions. When an individual poses a valid challenge to the authority, there would be many who would give a supporting hand. People need each of their support and assistance to come up and face strong authoritarians. Therefore passively agreeing would be deleterious for all except the ones who
make the policies.
Notwithstanding the possible shortcomings in the rules, there are times when the authoritarians do make the right decisions but cannot justify the reasons to the public. People should understand and overlook certain validations for the rules governed by their leaders, and put faith in them. For example, the US government spends millions of dollars on space research although there are millions of poor a and unemployed people in the country. People around the world put forth their questions on such unwise spending of resources by which the society does not benefit at all. Later an open letter by the director of NASA stated that space explorations is vital and benefits the future generation since they would reap additional resources for survival once this generation exhausts the resources on Earth.
We should therefore not accept the rules and decisions passively, but also keep a sound mind and think about the reason for making these rules in the first place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, after all, for example, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2304.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34570765661 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79283856391 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54060324826 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2476818074 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5238095238 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.97078651685 583% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256035761592 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741550485362 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075396449163 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612881546343 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775645914794 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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