People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Throughout the history, humans developed in a glorious extent and have reached to current state. It might be because of our nature in which to challenge anything even that looks impossible. This tendency sometimes retain risky actions and one would say they have carefully considered its consequences but others might say it’s not: sometimes, not evaluating the consequences have brought bigger development to the human history. However, I would like to assert that taking risky action should be sincerely examined before its beginning for the reasons mentioned below.
To begin with, human have only one life and we have our own responsibilities to take care of our lives. Since some dangerous actions can threaten our lives, we have to take sincere consideration before we act. For example, some prefer to try extreme sports- steep slope mountain biking, snowboarding, or surfing in harsh weather – so that they can obtain the utmost thrill and achievements. It is not mandatory to resist them from doing it, but it seems they implement their action without full judgment. Majority of people wouldn’t surf among the vast ocean when it is rain storming. Nature is unbeatable and transcending one that human can’t control and humans are easily be the passive subject to it. No one can predict what will happen in the nature since still people die a lot from its unpredictable disasters the nature brings. Thus, it is plausible to say in order to have safeguard your own sake and fulfill our will in our next future, we should take full consideration in the perspective of protecting our lives.
Nevertheless, in some cases, trying risky action equals to challenging the ultimate goal of human beings so not considering its consequences might give better motivation and could bring better success. For example, Shawn Whites, currently the most talented snowboarder in the world, actually didn’t calculate the after results of his dangerous snowboard techniques but achieved the most satisfactory results not only in the Olympics but also in his whole lifetime. He might have not been the world best if he considered the risk after his technique failure and thinking of him get injured. He just wished and had a strong will to achieve his most competent skill to win the Olympics and satisfy himself. At last, he achieved it. Thus, it is not a must thing to consider the consequences before you try risky actions.
However, if you are in companies and have to take care of more than one people, then you have to take full consideration before you take into action. One dangerous decision might bring a catastrophe that will ruin a lot of families to the empty road of unemployment. For example, during the Great Recession in 2008, many companies had to do make some risky actions of which intentions for the action was to save their companies. Unfortunately, not many companies have survived from the massive deficits from the Great Recession and a lot of employees have lost jobs. In this case, before implementing dangerous decisions, it is fully understandable that careful examinations for the consequences and studies of the impact needs to be conducted as a must thing.
In sum, while at first glance not considering the consequence of risky actions may seem to bring bigger success and fulfill one’s satisfaction, it appears it is not. Individually, people should conduct precarious decisions after sincere examinations for one’s only one life chance. And for others, for the safety of preserving one’s family and jobs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 686, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...an't control and humans are easily be the passive subject to it. No one can p...
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Line 3, column 893, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'safeguarded'.
Suggestion: safeguarded
...it is plausible to say in order to have safeguard your own sake and fulfill our will in o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, thus, while, as to, for example, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2991.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 583.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13036020583 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91379618374 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88124741987 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 294.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504288164666 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 935.1 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7174560987 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.038461538 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4230769231 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299665766387 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772381680893 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565031579896 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168579050922 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038132103085 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 100.480337079 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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