People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
If people began to consider the consequences before taking any kind of risky action, then it defies the very own definition of the word risk.A action is allegedly risky when the several outcomes of the scenario are unpredictable and capricious.There are several parts of a scenario which are based on assumption which we consider safe to go along with the risk.Therefore i disagree with the recommendation that people should consider all kinds of consequences before taking any risky action.Also, this does not mean that the risk is taken ignoring the the warranted outcomes of the action.
To begin with, people on a daily basis are taking risky action without even realising the unwanted outcome of that situation.For example in India, thousands of people in their daily routine of travelling through public transport such as buses and local train have a habit of boarding the respective mode of transport while in its running stage.Now this little piece of action which people have inured in their routine has led to negligent outcome of severe life disabling injury or even death for carrying out such ill practises.
But on the contrary a working professional planning to leave his secured job to pursue his dreams, his passion ruminates all kinds of circumstances and assumptions to finally dash towards his passion.And most of the times he decides not to do so due to different kinds of pressure situations that bend him back to his mundane routine.Considering a example, Conor Mac Gregor who is currently the the top mixed martial art fighter in the world left his job when he was 19 years old to give full time to his career and passion of fighting.Even though he was indebted with financial constraints at that time but he still decided to take the path full of risk and now he came out to be the maestro in his field.
In conclusion, there is no world record broken and threshold limit crossed considering the consequences of the risky action.As Albert Einstein has rightly said imagination is more important.And imagination without the impossible is a fact not a dream to conquer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97159090909 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95930015145 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 88.0 23.0359550562 382% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.78283079 60.3974514979 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 437.5 118.986275619 368% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 88.0 23.4991977007 374% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.75 5.21951772744 647% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178043662603 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105271226365 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767838420366 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105271226365 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767838420366 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.0 14.1392134831 325% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.84 48.8420337079 -37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.6 12.1743820225 309% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.73 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.9 8.38706741573 142% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.2 11.2143820225 332% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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