People who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The harshest critic of an idea or policy is the one who is deeply committed to it and works hard to ensure the idea is implemented effectively. A lot of examples where sportsperson and scientists achieving greatness are always looking towards the next milestone and are very critical of their achievements.
Let us begin by looking at scientists who are always at the brink of discovering new things and presenting new theories. Once a theory is presented, they work very hard to prove its validity. they ensure that there are no flaws in their assumptions and are very critical of their work. Zero tolerance policy, followed by scientists, ensures that as long as there is even a minute discrepancy in their result, they do not present the theory as proven. The results are again checked after ensuring that the problems are fixed. this example provides an insight on how a scientist working towards achieveing a goal will not tolerate any flaws and is very critical of his/her work.
Additionally, consider sportspersons, who are practicing hard day and night trying to achieve greatness and show how far physical human capabilities can go. Virat Kohli, one of the prominent cricketers to have represented india, has achieved greatness at a very young age and hungry for more titles. he is very critical of his performances on the field. he had performed well in a particular match, but his team couldn’t make it over the line. although, he had played very well, in the post match conference, he stated that he had failed as a player since he couldn’t make his team win. this example shows how players are very critical of their performances since they are deeply committed to their goals and practice hard to achieve greatness.
consider, Narendra modi, the prime minister of india. he was very committed to the idea of eliminating unaccounted money from the Indian economy. In order to achieve this task, he introduced note ban in July,2017. this resulted in a lot raids on many miscreants who were holding unaccounted money in their houses. although, the goal of the note ban was achieved, modi was very critical of the idea and stated that he will not stop until every penny of black money is seized. hence, this proves how critical he was his deeply committed idea.
All in all, from the few examples we have seen, we can clearly state that people who are deeply committed to an idea or policy are the most critical of it. hence, people will always be improving in their work as long as they are critical of their performances and idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 439.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86332574032 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73254539653 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48291571754 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0685982843 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0454545455 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9545454545 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 5.21951772744 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118271368935 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414414209762 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054808547134 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930132628925 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616828641155 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.