People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A competition between heart and brain is what this case is. In this growing world where everyone is running after success without looking behind there is no room for emotions left anymore. Logic has its hegemony over the worldly affairs now a days. Hence it is not incorrect to say those who take decisions on the ground of emotions are the inept decision makers.
Emotions are left far behind in the race for goal and and emotions are hardly genuine anymore. Dilemmas have stopped being the function of emotions. For example if a judge, supposed to provide justice to the victim family by punishing the criminal gets emotional swayed by the heart touching story of the culprit then it is quite possible that he will base his verdict in the negligence of the even the strongest proofs. Later that judge will convince himself concluding that proofs against the culprit which he overlooked might have been false. This is a critical case but in our day to day lives if the action is based on the emotions it is sure to produce its side effects.
Logic has to be the primary element of consideration while taking either trivial or major decision as the logic can't be deceptive while the emotions can be so often if not always. I do not deny that emotions can lead to a right decision but the odds of happening that seem to be very less as the emotions are not always backed by the honest interpretations of the the story. Suppose a person who is constantly ill treated by his partner then due to his love for the person and care for the relation, he will pull a wool over his eyes and bear all the sufferings which is fair. But if the same person follows the call of logic then he will take effective steps to ameliorate the situation which is what should actually happen.
Hence it is worthy to trust logic prior to the emotions as it provide the original picture. It might be bitter but is surely not partial. Emotions usually lead into a worse condition eventually which would have been solved if the decision taken would had been just to his brain providing logic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...s its hegemony over the worldly affairs now a days. Hence it is not incorrect to say those...
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Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...s hegemony over the worldly affairs now a days. Hence it is not incorrect to say those...
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Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ny over the worldly affairs now a days. Hence it is not incorrect to say those who ta...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...re left far behind in the race for goal and and emotions are hardly genuine anymore. Di...
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... trivial or major decision as the logic cant be deceptive while the emotions can be ...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ile the emotions can be so often if not always. I do not deny that emotions can lead t...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... of happening that seem to be very less as the emotions are not always backed by t...
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Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...backed by the honest interpretations of the the story. Suppose a person who is constant...
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Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...backed by the honest interpretations of the the story. Suppose a person who is constant...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...which is what should actually happen. Hence it is worthy to trust logic prior to th...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...been solved if the decision taken would had been just to his brain providing logic....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, look, so, then, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56720430108 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37273481562 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534946236559 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5680144548 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1875 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200698360845 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062683811605 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608943731213 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125633910408 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028512363861 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.