Emotional imbalance is a natural human trait that is far more consequential than any other imbalances in the body because the state of being out of control at times lacks proper insights for decision making skills. The prompt asserts that poor decision makers are those who take decisions at the time of emotional imbalance. In my opinion, I totally agree with the prompt as conceding to an emotion that is likely to drive the major decisions in a person's life in to an arrant disaster. The ramifications that one can expect when he/she takes decisions during an emotionally vulnerable state can be attributed to various reasons.
Majority of the reasons can be due to the volatility in the emotions that occur once the decision is conceived precipitously. For instance, there can be a lot of regrets for a hasty decision that can be an adverse game changer. With persons unable to combat emotional balance taking a toll on their life affects their kith and kin in a way more direct than it can ever happen to them. Decisions play a prominent role in a person's life right from choosing a school to selecting a life partner. To exemplify further, a vacillating emotion that made him choose his career based on the current recurrences of sentiments around him, can result in a life long ride over the career that he is totally apathetic with. Therefore, a person is expected to be placid at instances where there requires a better insights about future.
Further to add, when the situation is so poignant that people are unaware about the domino effect that he or his family members will encounter, converging in to a drastic problem in near future. The justifications advocated by such persons are merely irreversible so as to always end up in a pathetic situation. It is always expected to have a clear sky after a catastrophic storm. If only the issues around a person is addressed in a way more clearer with total lucid perceptions, a person is ensured to have an amazing prognostication about the sequential happenings that can trigger more positive effects. There goes a term coined for such people as being Pollyannaish. In fact, it is highly appreciable to maintain a sangfroid nature while facing a turbulence in life so that people try to be more optimistic.
Certain qualities defines an extremely good decision makers for life. People depend upon the decisions of the parents until and unless they are given the liberty to choose what they want. However, an adult person being more independent makes numerous decisions in life. A clear cut strategy and decision maker always make himself calm and poised with some techniques. For example, a person is sure to have a clear vision about the happenings around him, if he/she practices yoga and meditation. A tranquil environment with a small investment in time invites more positivity around the aura of a person. It helps to reflect over the exact situations and emotions. In fact, it is even helpful to get rid of the emotional manipulations around him in a way that the person gets a clarity about the trigger of such situations. Thus, practicing an effective technique to subside the emotions in a person brings a wonderful insight about life.
To recapitulate, a poor decision maker always give reasons for one or the other faults he committed. However, a situation in which the person makes such decisions must also be considered to accept the reasons jotted. Few people may even justify the emotions of others and support them for the decisions made hastily. Having said that, regardless of whatever may be the situation maintaining few personal decorum and space for taking a decision at moments that are important outweighs the lame excuses given after facing the aftermath.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 449, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ikely to drive the major decisions in a persons life in to an arrant disaster. The rami...
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Line 2, column 422, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...m. Decisions play a prominent role in a persons life right from choosing a school to se...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...quires a better insights about future. Further to add, when the situation is so poigna...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...by such persons are merely irreversible so as to always end up in a pathetic situation. ...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'clearer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: clearer
...s around a person is addressed in a way more clearer with total lucid perceptions, a person ...
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Line 4, column 427, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding happenings'?
Suggestion: the surrounding happenings
...on is sure to have a clear vision about the happenings around him, if he/she practices yoga and meditatio...
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Line 5, column 535, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cuses given after facing the aftermath.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3111.0 2235.4752809 139% => OK
No of words: 634.0 442.535393258 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90694006309 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01790360848 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79248641464 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 313.0 215.323595506 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493690851735 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 1024.2 704.065955056 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9098358467 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.275862069 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8620689655 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89655172414 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317823088589 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973178489387 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980247061997 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201855046801 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100532940543 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 163.0 100.480337079 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.