People who pursue their own intellectual interest for purely personal reasons are more likely to benefit the rest of the world than who try to act for public good.
All the people on this planet has their own intellectual interest or goals which they want to pursue. their goals or interest only if it is benign and prospective can benefit large section of society.
Some People align their personal goal or interest like teaching, research with the public good. By achieving their personal goals they are doing good for society. Scientist and researchers tries to resolve their curiosity or quandary related to their research field. If successful in doing so it benefits large section of society. For instance famous scientist Edison was curious about how electric bulb work. By solving this puzzle, he invented electric bulb which was beneficial for whole society.
However, People can also have goals that are malicious or detrimental to a society. These people serve no good to society. For example Most terrorists has the goal to bomb the public place or any government building or hijacking the plane and many such goals that are detrimental to society. By achieving this goal they are serving no good to society. These kind of goals cost a society a lot.
There are some people who try to act for public good for their own benefit. These people does not contribute towards development of the society. Consider politicians, they tend to launch series of rhetoric during their election campaign and entice public to vote for them. But soon after winning the election they renege on their promise which they have committed to public . They gain huge publicity by showing off or pretending good works like opening fake NGOs or hospitals for the sole aim of converting their black money into white.
In conclusion, People can benefit a society only if they have benign, creative and productive personal goals or interest. People who pretends to serve good are not beneficial for society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05940594059 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49537097412 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514851485149 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.142751793 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.65 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.15 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338038720839 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12325488788 0.0831039109588 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126728040498 0.0758088955206 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212367280573 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837153970573 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.