People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.

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People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.

It is said that man is a creature of circumstances. In other words, it means that peoples’ life and destiny is shaped by the society. Peoples’ behavior are confined by the society, their behavior, activities, wills and so forth are restricted or circumscribed by non-other than the surrounding. I agree with the above assertion that people’s behavior is largely determined by the forces not of their own making. Even if they have some unconventional desires they are not allowed to perform that due to the so called society.

First and foremost, in the developing countries like ours’ the society are based within some norms ethical values, beliefs that have be imitated. And, people are not allowed to go beyond these norms and ethical value people are judged harshly and not accepted by the society. For instance, in our society there is no tradition to have a children before the marriage, if women do that then they are judged and hatred in the society and they are not given a space in the society. Hence, in such society people are confined to what things should be done and what to be not done. That means, people are shaped by the society where they live.

Secondly, most of the people doesn’t want to be maverick they follow what their conventions are. The want to be in comfort zone and doesn’t want to shift their paradigm. Also they think, what the society might think or people might think about their activities and become restricted. Not all society are the same type as we discussed above, but the people are who overthinks that they may be judged for their behaviors or desires. Not all maverick ideas are not respected in the society, those ideas that will help to reform the society and help the society to benefit will be easily be accepted.

Lastly, on the other hand, especially in the modern society where democracy and free will are accepted, in such society the people’s behavior will be independent rather than being determined by the forces. In the cities, we can see that people are free to make their own choices, they have their own kind of liking, desires. Likewise there are free to make their own decision. Moreover, these unfettered attitude of the surrounding make the people like to creates new ideas which helps to supersede the wrong conventional belief and also help in easiness in life of the people.

To sum up, there are some societies which have ascribed some norms, ethical values and doesn’t accept the non-conformist ideas, attitude or behavior ,but nowadays most of them are modern societies which rather allow or respect the free wills, desires of people and these free mindset help to create the ideas which help to boost the society and supplant the convention beliefs which are obsolete with the contemporary reforms.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 428, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... by the forces not of their own making. Even if they have some unconventional desires t...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...norms ethical values, beliefs that have be imitated. And, people are not allowed t...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...r society there is no tradition to have a children before the marriage, if women do that t...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...sn't want to shift their paradigm. Also they think, what the society might thin...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...have their own kind of liking, desires. Likewise there are free to make their own decisi...
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Line 7, column 462, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'create'.
Suggestion: create
...the surrounding make the people like to creates new ideas which helps to supersede the ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n-conformist ideas, attitude or behavior ,but nowadays most of them are modern so...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...formist ideas, attitude or behavior ,but nowadays most of them are modern societi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, lastly, likewise, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, kind of, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2348.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 475.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94315789474 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64644223623 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442105263158 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.7551833219 60.3974514979 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.4 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85 5.21951772744 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251443128613 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987333829374 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13113437168 0.0758088955206 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15796817223 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110932493566 0.0667264976115 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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