People who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Idea or policy are the fundamental principle governing the life of people. To perform any activities or actions there are certain methodologies or principle. However, the reforming or revolutionary concepts are the exceptions for it. I agree with the above assertion that most significant people are those who are devoted into the idea or policy, those are sure to be the ideal or inspirations for other people.
First and foremost, in society we follow a confined laws, norms, ethical values, policies. In addition to, we chose our heroic figure for those we accomplish the work in the efficacious works and further in our moral society we opt those figure who are guided by the good moral values, principles, ideas or policy. Every people needs to follow the rules and regulations to be an epitome for other people. For instance, we can consider that, if the people are eminent in certain realm they do things they get praise from others, but they are not following guiding policy or they cross the limit in terms of laws or principle, they are not respected rather they are defamed.
Secondly, to be every last idol in position or get venerated by other in their whole life, one should not cross the moral values and they should follow certain ascribed ideas. Being a transient person only one can progress in their field. One should be adamant in their decision rather than being fluctuating in their decision or activities. Moreover, it is every one's nature that we get influenced by some people by their specific aspect, and further if they change such appreciated behavior, then the follower or fans get disappointed.
Admittedly, there are different idols in different realms that is those are the fundamental figure for the followers. For instance, in politics, citizen first support a candidate to vote by liking their ideals or principles. They see some unique features or citizen see some desire of development in such candidate and they support them without any skeptics during the election. Those people after being opted in important position the advocates want to seem the applications of their principle. On the other hand if they are aberrant from the ascribed ideology then sponsor will no more be supporting him further. Therefore, it’s the matter of being obdurate in own ideology to be critical figures.
To sum up, everybody wants their idols to be as they are choose first as, they follow what they promised first so, to be a most substantial one should change his strategy and stick on his ideals and follow the policy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: A_PLURAL
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'law'?
...remost, in society we follow a confined laws, norms, ethical values, policies. In ad...
Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
...ody wants their idols to be as they are choose first as, they follow what they promise...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 429.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97668997669 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63479164756 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498834498834 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9128201424 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.368421053 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5789473684 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0816285159281 0.243740707755 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031053905334 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362899225918 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574915865403 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509326554973 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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