People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Risks are the uncertain actions or decisions, the possibility of the result is unknown if there is risk. If certain risk is taken then there is no any conformity that only good will happen there may also be bad consequences too. I strongly agree with the above assertion that everyone should undertake the risky action only after consideration of its intended result or possibility.
First and foremost, before performing any action one needs to be well informed about the further results of it. Every action is conducted to produce certain result, however, there might be some exception that the expected result might not be produced. But before conducting any action, everyone should be well prepared for its implication because outcome is not certain to be favoring, it might also be harsh. For instance, a child might not know what will happen if he get into the swimming pool. If the child dives in the swimming pool without knowing the consequences, he might get drowned and loss his life. On the other hand, if another child is well aware about it, he will be well prepared about it, before getting to swimming pool. He tries to learn swimming first by going to the lower height.
Secondly, every action is valuable in different aspect. Likewise, in business where money is the primary value, there is likely the consideration of risk before establishing a business. Before institutionalizing the business every entrepreneur knows what will be the risk, so they first project the risk, and know well about in what extent it might affect the project. Evaluating the risk, they screen whether the business is feasible to earn profit or not. Afterwards, they taken decision upon to establish the business or not. Thus, before delving into some action research must be done a lot, what type of outcome are likely to result, since it is a matter of time, money, and sometimes the risk of life also involves.
Admittedly, if one invests a lot of time in doing certain actions, there might be some beforehand analysis job. For instance, in conducting a research in some topic, every scientist first prepare a proposal, what are the propose of the result, what are the likely outcome of the research what are the likely risk, if certain deviation of the result occurs, to what extent the result may be aberrant, these all factors are considered.
To sum up, every action need some beforehand scrutiny, to know about the consequences if the intended result will not occur then what are the likely result to be produced because there might also occur detrimental effects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the result is unknown if there is risk. If certain risk is taken then there is no ...
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... If certain risk is taken then there is no any conformity that only good will happ...
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Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...d might not know what will happen if he get into the swimming pool. If the child di...
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Line 3, column 759, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to swim'.
Suggestion: to swim
...ing to swimming pool. He tries to learn swimming first by going to the lower height. ...
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Line 5, column 476, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'took'?
Suggestion: took
...to earn profit or not. Afterwards, they taken decision upon to establish the business...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...alysis job. For instance, in conducting a research in some topic, every scientist first pr...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tist first prepare a proposal, what are the propose of the result, what are the likely outc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93793103448 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62540410796 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448275862069 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4457398635 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.052631579 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8947368421 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0798494183671 0.243740707755 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335844875197 0.0831039109588 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454808160466 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534271734066 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443824764745 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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