Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Scientist has done a lot to clarify every material process around us; implications produced by them helps to manifest the doubt of occurrence of the process around us. I agree with the above assertion that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us rather than making the world more complex, as they are trying the disentangle the skeptics.
First and foremost, theory and hypothesis scientist creates intends to solve the paradox of issues. The discoveries made by the scientist helps in perspicuity of the question. For instance, previously, the shape of the earth was unknown, some assumed it might be flat or otherwise some may have assumed the earth to be of different irregular shape. But when the scientist discovered the earth is oval shape, it served to answer the obscurity, and which in turn, helped further to create many discoveries with the support of it. Therefore, the discoveries avails the better apprehension of the conundrums.
Secondly, the scientist have served to cohere the cause and effect of the process happening around us. The scientific discoveries has helped the people to know about the mechanism of process of certain things occurring around us, which helps the people to be aware of it. For instance, the discoveries of the rainfall process can be taken as the example that, the results of the scientific research help people to understand the world more deliberately. Moreover, knowing the process of the rainfall, the people can anticipate the similar process on different respect or realms. This in turn can help to extrapolate the result in tantamount issue.
However, some might think that the science has made the things more complex than we have ever realized, but it depends upon how much the individual knowledge acquires about it. For instance, the quantum mechanics can’t be delved by the individual of some other discipline other than science that is no any interesting topic for them. In addition to, they think that scientist have made the things more complex but they are unaware about the discoveries what science field people can realize. Thus, to generalize the lay audience are likely to assume that science has convoluted the simple things, but science produces the efficacious result which can be justified by the science realms.
To sum up, the scientific discoveries has help to lucid the confusion of the process or circumstance around us rather than it is thought to make things complex. Moreover, it is the matter of the people’s knowledge on that topic what they can visualize or apprehend which helps to manifest the world around us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding process'?
Suggestion: the surrounding process
... to manifest the doubt of occurrence of the process around us. I agree with the above assertion that ...
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Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... world more complex, as they are trying the disentangle the skeptics. First and foremost, th...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...g around us. The scientific discoveries has helped the people to know about the mec...
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Line 7, column 305, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...r discipline other than science that is no any interesting topic for them. In addi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12413793103 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76223326674 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448275862069 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0374513909 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362126694113 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116869450621 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102632592938 0.0758088955206 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222246642943 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106630240661 0.0667264976115 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.