People remember special gifts or presents that they have received. Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People provide gifts on the special occasions such as birthday, marriage, special events. Giving gifts and takings gifts helps to enhance the relationships. The special gifts or presents that people receive are often remembered for ages, as it is relates to the special moments linked with it.
To begin with, gifts are the stuffs attached to some specific person. No matter what is the gift, how small or big is it, it will always value the relationship with friends, couple or families. For instance, I got a plastic bird, which could fly by rotating the dynamo on it, in my birthday, when I was small, and it was given by one of my friend. Now I am adult and not fond of toys, but I have kept that gift with me. Moreover, by seeing it I remember the friend who had given me that gift. Therefore, gifts are the special things that attaches the memories of someone who gave it.
Furthermore, the gift serves to boost the relationship, and the moment when it is given will be always remembered. For instance, a boy give a necklace to a girl, by which she feels very special. By making her special, she thinks that the boy is giving her importance. In addition to, it server to run the chariot more efficiently and those special event are always captured in the mind, and can never be forget. When I was small, my aunt gave me a Mac Book, I felt really special getting that gift and I can’t thank her more. Moreover, I always thought positive about her, she was remarkable for me, and I have a strong bond with her. She often invites me for the dinner.
Finally, sometime gift are antidote for the relationships. It serves to overturn the situation; an angry person can be happy. For instance, two friends are unhappy with each other, and had been in a huge fight. One of the friends bring gift to other friends, then he might not want to compromise at first but later on there will consensus among them, the fight will overt and they become happy. So, the gifts serves as tool of arbitrator.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will always be
...onship, and the moment when it is given will be always remembered. For instance, a boy give a ...
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Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'be' and 'forget'.
Suggestion: be never forget
...re always captured in the mind, and can never be forget. When I was small, my aunt gave me a Ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 22.412803532 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 363.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53719008264 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46782757789 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 145.348785872 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537190082645 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 419.366225166 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0950852738 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4285714286 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 4.33554083885 392% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183922077163 0.272083759551 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623270055122 0.0996497079465 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558615609483 0.0662205650399 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129770320554 0.162205337803 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801974052897 0.0443174109184 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.3589403974 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.8541721854 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.2367328918 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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