Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Not everyone has the same interest and talents. The college provides the education for the student where they indulge in their own field of interest, they find their own major and decide on what field they want to explore or wander or get knowledge. So, the college is the gateway for the student for the future. However, as the above assertion, there are two types of people who consider they should choose their field of study on the basis of their talent and interest and other are there to choose their field of study by the availability of job. I agree with the one, who choose their field of study by their real talent and interest because one can do better on what he is interested in.
Firstly, people are successful in the field on which they are interested. Moreover, people will produce significant result doing what they are interested or talented on. As Steve Job has said that “The only way to do great works is to love what you do.” From this proverb, what we can assert is that we if we do the things we love or those which we are interested in then only we can produce a fruitful result. There are many people who often choose their career based on job opportunities. However, these people will be irked after they are indulged in the job since they have no interest on it, they are doing it for the sake of the just income, not for their personal satisfaction.
Secondly, the pragmatic and innovative ideas come from those people who do it by their interest. Every person has their own liking or interest and the ideas come from their real interest on it. Those can only success and come up with the new innovative idea who are doing the things on their real interest. A person can’t achieve a great thing doing without their own interest. For instance, youtube has become the real platform for the one who likes to entertain people they can make videos and make people amused. Nevertheless, who thought that youtube would be the platform for one to earn money, it has become a real example that one can be a success if he/she does what they are talented or interest in. If one has interest on a field then it is not significant to run towards the opportunities. However, if a people is deliberate in a field and comes up with new ideas that he has nothing to do or seek for opportunities.
Lastly, we can see that there are lots of people who choose their field focusing on job opportunities and have to live their life with becoming dull and uninteresting. So, one should choose their field of study on the basis of the interest. A job is just a trivial thing in life, real happiness is the success in life, getting to do what you like is the satiable moment. However, money is necessary for life to live but it is not a significant thing to make one’s life pleasant and successful.
To sum up, one shouldn’t fall onto the job opportunities for choosing their career and field for interest because life is long to live, should think long term, and doing their real thing what you like, makes you feel happy and satisfied in life and that is the life for to be happy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'Those cans'?
Suggestion: This can; Those cans
...as come from their real interest on it. Those can only success and come up with the new i...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovative'.
Suggestion: innovative
...e can only success and come up with the new innovative idea who are doing the things on their ...
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Line 5, column 715, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... what they are talented or interest in. If one has interest on a field then it is ...
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Line 9, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e and that is the life for to be happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 33.0505617978 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2558.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 566.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51943462898 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87757670434 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46869295985 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.365724381625 0.4932671777 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 815.4 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7483533276 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.217391304 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6086956522 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328230402682 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129573586137 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109471694857 0.0758088955206 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221197113338 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130632509517 0.0667264976115 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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