Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
The major cities are on the eyes of the government to thrive. The government wants to patronize more for the major cities. I agree with the above claim but the reason for the claim is not germane that the cultural traditions are preserved and generated in the cities. The cultural tradition is well known is rural area and not in cities. We can know about the culture and tradition of certain ethnic group in their respective area. So, I assert that the above statement can’t be aggreed because the reason for the claim is skeptical.
The authenticity of culture and tradition are seen in the native place of the respective ethnic group. In cities there may be museum with some evidences or picture, to know about the culture and tradition but it is more relevant, informative is knowing those thing for their native places or areas. For instance, there are many vintage royal palace of the old times which are not generally on the cities and if we visit the real palace we can get to know more than just seeing it in museum. The real appearance reflects many informative things and in-depth ideas about it. Not only just palaces there are many source of cultures and traditions of the particular area. There are diversity of group of people, who have their own kind of costumes, language, tradition, ethnicity, social moral principles. Moreover, these things will be known when we get to see from our eyes. Hence, cities are not the suitable place where national cultural traditions are protected, and the idea of financial support the major cities is illogical.
To thrive the country, just only burgeoning the cities, is a bad idea. The country should also look upon the rural town or area. And where there are the people who is facing the real problems. As we discussed above that, it’s not the cities where cultures, ethnicity, are justified. How can it be relevant that, to know about a family not asking same family and rather asking the other one. Likewise, it is similar to say that cities will best describes and protect the cultures. Rather than over patronizing the cities the government should think about supporting the rural areas where the real cultures, traditions, etc lies and this will help benefit the people and also flourish the government: developing such places will also increase the tourist attractions. Since, tourists or visitors like to explore to culture of different people from different place and if the areas with such diversity is well organized or has the platform for the tourist then this will help for economic benefit of such place and also contribute to the nation economy.
There are many ethnic or group of people in the country who are unknown and government is unaware about it. Such groups should be preserved since it matters on the history, whether they are consider higher or lower rank in societies, government should be concerned about them. Some group may such that, only few of them may be alive or their chain is likely to be extinct, government should think about them to preserve them , provided facilities that they are deprived of. So that they may have easiness for their survival. Therefore, the financial support on other place rather than cities are to be made more for these purpose.
To sum up, the idea that government should make sure the financial support in major cities for preserving and generating the culture and tradition is skeptical, as we discussed above that there are many aspect on the rural areas to be flourish and people are backward and deprived of normal facilities. Moreover rural area being more important for the culture and tradition, such are the areas required to have financial support and not the cities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many sources
...out it. Not only just palaces there are many source of cultures and traditions of the parti...
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Suggestion:
...also contribute to the nation economy. There are many ethnic or group of people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, likewise, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 44.0 19.5258426966 225% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3089.0 2235.4752809 138% => OK
No of words: 632.0 442.535393258 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88765822785 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01394158123 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47516609437 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.397151898734 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 988.2 704.065955056 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4271618077 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.517241379 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7931034483 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10344827586 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255863738537 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829562730463 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805862407768 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169462240866 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607351404513 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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