People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The argument that people's behavior is largely determined by the forces not of their own making is well established on the basis of the followings.
Majority of the people act in a certain way based on some forces rather than acting naturally and freely. Acceptance of this assertion yields that majority follows the behavior driven by some forces. In case of stock market, one can understand this phenomena where majority follows the actions of the others in decision making. Hence, the moderated behavior is not the natural behavior of an individual toward a decision making process.
However, behavior is a more guided phenomena and is also linked with the availability of the information. Also, it depends on the rational thinking of an individual. if you are more confident and have absolute knowledge, than the behavior is not followed by the forces. Under such circumstances, individual behavior will be free from any inclination.
Moreover, forces can exert somehow an impact on the individual behavior. For example, in a well know study of the children behavior where a child was given free hand to act in his/ her own way. The results were stated as actual behavior where majority of the children tend to lie. However, before stating such statement, it is also important to consider that the children were supposed to act in a supposed manner under the study environment. Hence, it is also impossible to say that behavior is not affected by the forces.
Above all, it is understandable that there exists forces under which an individual behavior is guided to act in a certain way. Even in everyday life, we tend to make decisions on the basis of the experiences of the others to avoid any risk and ambiguity. However, behavior is unbiased when we base a decision on the basis of the experience and knowledge. But such consideration is achieved when one's behavior is guided and supervised by the forces over the time. Hence, it is logical to conclude the people’s behavior is largely determined by the forces not of their own making.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97391304348 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81964483143 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460869565217 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7564312135 60.3974514979 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.3157894737 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26315789474 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184408841015 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608399588421 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619785748169 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116482430269 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506061670429 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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