The perceived greatness of any political leader has more to do with the challenges faced by that leader than with any of his or her inherent skills and abilities.
The statement asserts that a great political leader is not someone who has good skills or abilities, a great leader is the one who has faced problems and challanges and prevailed. In my opinion I do agree with the author of the statement. The skills a person inherit or the abilities he has, doesn't do any good, if they are not used in the battlefield of politics.
Who is a leader? A leader is a person people choose to represent them, to champion them, a leader is a person who takes the right decisions, and leads them to the right path, a leader is a person who fights, and faces challenges for the sake of his people, deals with enigmatic issues on behalf of his people. Of course, skills and abilities are important for a leader, to lead his people, but the more important thing for a leader is the courage and determination to work for his people, to fight for his people.
A political leader is neeeded to be astute enough to face and solve difficult problems, to deal with various problems. A national leader, The prime minister of a country, for instance, has to deal with many situations, national problems, like proper election, situations with national economy, and also international situations, like business deals with other countries, or very sensitive issues like dealing with refugees entering from neighbouring countries. To deal with these various kinds of difficult problem, people do need a leader who is wise enough to deal with them.
However, it is also a matter of fact that, if the person who's supposed to lead a nation, the people of the nation, is he willing to face those challenges? Or, is he just focused on his career as a politician, who is just another person working for himself to be in a position of power? If he is, then These kind of people can not be called a great leader.
So, just having skills does not make anyone a great leader. A great leader is the person who is willing to use those skills to lead his people, to fight, to face challenges for his people. Just a look back on history can tell us that the perceived greatness of a polititical leader has more to do with the works they did, the sacrifices they made for their people. Nelson Mandela is a great leader, Martin Luther King is great leader, Bangabandhu Sheikh Mujibur Rahman is great leader. They fought for their people went to jail, even risked their lives for their country, for their people. This is why people remembers them, respects them, idlizes them.
In conclusion, I have to say that skills, abilities, and acumen is needed to be a leader, to face various kinds of difficult situations. But the willingness to face those problems is also necessary, that's what makes a great leader. A great warrior is the not the one with good swordsmanship, a great warrior is the one who won fought great wars with courage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2352.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 504.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58744461091 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.418650793651 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.0 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.38483146067 296% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0246634146 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412624778299 0.243740707755 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13903220423 0.0831039109588 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700548948968 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228238454259 0.150359130593 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729126451254 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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