Practicing politics by consensus and identification of commonalities is better than considering the objective of politics to be the pursuance of ideals
Politics varies vastly from country to country. But the only thins common in all of that is that the politics is responsible for the outcome of the country. Whether that be better for the country or not. The two types monarchy and democracy. The issue tells us that the politics practiced by consensus that is by democracy is better than doing what one feels like. If that be a case of monarchy where only one ruler has the hegemony over the whole country and every decision is taken by that ruler then, the ruler would be the only deciding factor in the government. Whereas in democracy the people have the indirect power to rule the country.
The consensus politics is way better because it gives the chance to others to land their ideas about a problem and the solution thus obtained is in result of collaboration of all the people. Firstly, the people select the ruling party and it is not that the ruling party has all the right to to make up any laws. Instead any decision is taken by agreement by both the ruling and opposing party by voting. In this way the consensus is maintained.
On the other hand, the individual decision making is not as appreciated as the other because it shouldn't. This is because the sole ruler has all the power to steer the country either to progress or to its downfall. No matter the sole ruler is selected by the people, there should be a check on the powers. Devoid of the limit, the ruler is tend to take rash decisions only considering his/her own welfare. Another factor for it could be that all the decisions have to be made by the sole person and that person also has some limits which would ultimately degrade the quality. Take for example England has a queen but even her powers are in check which is an ideal state.
The democracy politics gives a chance to control the powers given to the ruling party as the opposition party has a say in the laws and reforms that are to be set. This ensures that only the correct and acceptable decisions are made which are beneficial for the people.
Also politics should be considered as a way in which a ruler can guide the whole country instead a source of income. This will make sure that the decisions taken are not taken depending on the factors that are beneficial to only one or few. Thus, many countries have adopted the democratic politics in which the tyrannical rule is not any more practiced
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, thus, whereas, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 434.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53686635945 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3518258342 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417050691244 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6636515057 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221537209723 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670717881874 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707440702171 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125138345694 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632720659096 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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