Scandals are definitely immoral but if we look at the bright side, we might get a better look at the practicality of it. I agree with the given statement that scandals are helpful in capturing a lot of the innate problems in our society.
Firstly, we can see there are lots of political scandals occurring throughout the world, in fact in every country we can see that there is some form of wrongdoing happening within the political realm that the public doesn’t get to see. For example, a politician abuses his power and instead of providing services to the community he secretly gets involved in embezzlement. Once this scandal is pointed out, we clearly try to make an alternation to avoid this in the future. It is worth noting here that speakers and reformers cannot cite all the problems because of this complex and intricate world, only after a certain scandal does the limelight shift towards the inherent problems in the political system. However, it should also be noted that just because scandals are helping us determine the problems, does not imply that these problems will be solved.
Secondly, there are also scandals in commercial systems, for example, in a company where a person has been given the responsibility where the sum of money he was supposed to honestly look after, is the person who commits fraud. This scandal, while not useful to the company, is surely beneficial to understand the ways in which frauds can be committed in monetary issues and hence in the future try to avoid these problems. Therefore, once a scandal occurs, it becomes specific as to where the fault was, and we can then fix that defect and preclude that from happening in the future. But in certain cases where the fraud is so big, it becomes impossible to mend that problem, so in some situations, it should be necessary to learn about the problems that a speaker or reformer has talked about and take necessary actions before any major scam takes place.
Finally, there are also scandals which happen in individual peoples lives, like sexual scandals, personal scandals regarding money, or any deceit that happens without the person knowing. These kinds of problems definitely highlight some of the severe problems of humanity that need to be fixed. We can clearly see the effect these scandals have on our elders once these are shown on television, for example. They always tell us to be aware and not trust anyone we see because this world has become a dangerous place for the naïvete. But, it also is also true that exposure to the amount of scandals has made us worry even more leading to distrust of innocent people too. So in certain cases, the superficial talks of speakers and reformers can be said to be helpful in the sense that it won't make us too much concerned.
Thus, it is quite apparent that scandals, while having their immoral side, can be pragmatic, as it explicitly points out the problem that we would have otherwise never known and speakers would have never talked about.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, honestly, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2503.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 517.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8413926499 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52227189646 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512572533849 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 791.1 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7066750712 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.055555556 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7222222222 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19573318996 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640415704726 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431557571629 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108003421168 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341416528249 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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