Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Anytime a political figure makes a mistake or a businessman get caughts living a regular mans life the situation is presented in media as a scandal. Things that dont really matter to public when a regular man did suddenly gains the utmost importance when a renown person does the same. Most of the time this so called scandals are moot to public and rather than being informative turns in to an entertainment subject. Ofcourse there are people who also digs deeper in to the issue and tries to understand its implications and this is useful for that small portion. However, the perception of the majority is not alike and rather than being useful, scandals are harmful for majority of the public by distorting their attention from more important issues.
Scandals most of the time pulls redundant attention than they deserve but not because of the importance of the issue, mostly due to the public figures charm that are engaged in the mentioned scandalous affair. Rather than the constituent of the scandal ,rather it is economic, social or personal, what matter to public is the actors involved in it. Therefore their efficiency in enlightening public in some problems is limited. Average public rather than considering the legal and economic implications of the scandal or the nature of the problem focuses on the gossip part of it. Therefore scandals are not likely to reach their goals.
Aside from their inability in enlihtening the public, scandals distort attention from other issues which are more crucial in an average citizens daily life. Suddenly everyone forget about the increasing energy prices or the diplomatic problems with a neighboring country or the latest limitations on agricultural production and focus on the light night shows discussing the scandal as an entertainment subject. This proves that scandals saps all the attention on public to issues largely irrelevant to them.
Finally, scandals for the sake of attention are denigrating for people who are involved in it. Of course there must bu a punishmet for corruption and any type of wrongdoing but this must be left to judges. Once a scandal pops out people involved in it their families and friends are all under pressure and they become target of a huge public scorn. Their lifes get irrevocable damage therefore it became impossible for them to lead a regular life after their punishment period ends.
To conclude, scandals while trying to focus attention to understated issues are not useful for the general public and injudiciously harmful for the people who are involved in it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nted in media as a scandal. Things that dont really matter to public when a regular ...
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'gain'
Suggestion: gain
... public when a regular man did suddenly gains the utmost importance when a renown per...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ther than the constituent of the scandal ,rather it is economic, social or persona...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...to public is the actors involved in it. Therefore their efficiency in enlightening public...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...oblem focuses on the gossip part of it. Therefore scandals are not likely to reach their ...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'citizen'?
Suggestion: citizen
...es which are more crucial in an average citizens daily life. Suddenly everyone forget ab...
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Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...derstated issues are not useful for the general public and injudiciously harmful for the peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08254716981 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71018275346 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502358490566 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9006240039 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.722222222 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128802645797 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458328917035 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285731928035 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824891509132 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285363340427 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.