Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
scandals are something which causes disruption among people when somebody says something which the society does not approve of or any unethical behavior causes a scandal. The author say's that they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.it can be true as you always learn from your mistakes when something huge comes out from your mistake it makes other's as well yourself to be very cautious, but few scandals might not be that important notice or it might fail to create an impact.
Let's take an example, everybody has heard of hardik pandya an indian cricketer he was called on to talk show called Koffee with karan where they ask you random questions about your personal and professional life. So when hardik pandya has answered few questions in an improper way which caused a huge scandal. he was suspended from the cricket team for a small amount of time but later everybody has forgotton it and moved on. but it did create an impact on people about the improper behavior.
when there is political scandal like a politician is caught due to corruption or any other unethical behavior. it creates an awareness to others as well that electing such politicion might not benefit the country rather it might turn upside down as they have the power to protect themselves. these scandals create a lot awareness in the society which in turn start's making the rules much strict.
Another example of such scandals are accidents. In India there were lot of issues regarding traffic rules and regulation. The public never gave an eye to such rules, but then it started causing accidents in one such incident a small child of four years old was badly effected by it and passed away. this created a huge impact on everybody. The public started realising their mistakes and the rules were made much stricter. if not followed there would be punishments or fine. this scandal helped in taming of the people but at a cost of kid's life.
few scandals are useful as they help in realising the problems and solving it.As they create an awareness among people to not repeat such mistakes. if just said about these scandals normally it would not have created an impact. people have voiced out their problems which helps in solving.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, then, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81794871795 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37279812461 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.5564305581 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8947368421 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5263157895 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21052631579 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204392030205 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053367978977 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636663710862 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115137528212 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087956608981 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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