Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.

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Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.

Lots of people tend to think that scandals are useful since they focus our attention on different problems in ways that no speaker ever could, others seem to disagree with it. In my opinion, I believe that scandals are truly useful. The following discussion reveals my stand and reasoning.

To begin with, scandals often are some information that people usually did not know. To be specific, lots of important information that only the scandals will tell us. For example, there is one attorney general in my country who used to be venal. People in my country thought he was a honest and justice general until the scandals pervaded. Lot of people were stunning with this scandals and still believe he was a honest man. Nevertheless, the general eventually arrested by the police. Therefore, when poeple are dissembled by some lies, , scandals are useful that they can tell people the truth.

Moreover, scandals can make people to think what the mistakes they made. That is to say, if people who saw the scandals which told something about him or her, they might think what they did wrong. For instance, there is a crabby artist in my country, when the scandals told people that he used to fulminate to other artist, he was shamed to face the public. After that scandals pervaded, he turned to be a good man that he always smile to everyone and was no more angry from then on. Therefore, scandals are obviously useful to people that they can think the mistakes which they have.

True, some people might say that scandals are not useful to people since they are always noxious, and people usually misunderstood by such scandals. However, this argument fools to consider the fact that scandals are noxious because they reflect the problems which lots of speakers or reformers would choose to evade. That is to say, only the scandals can be such veracious. Thus, it is hard to convince people of this idea.

To sum up, with the reasons mentioned above, I believe that scandals are useful for people to focus on several different problems. There seems to be some validity to other points of view. However, I still think that the reasons for my opinion are stronger.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83422459893 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38910713215 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8470193077 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1818181818 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95454545455 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302824693234 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860499747561 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110017249509 0.0758088955206 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188367985095 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118872629585 0.0667264976115 178% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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