School should do more to prepare students for the non-academic aspects of adulthood.
Education is certainly a hot issue faced by every country. Everyone has their own perspective towards the way education should be carved in their city or country. However,
government has its own policies like Race to the top , no child left behind and so many other rules which are need to be followed by each educational organisations. While we are busy in providing education to 100% population of the country we for get that we are loosing on quality education. The education is of no use if it doesn't help you in your worst situations. Hence, one should give equal importance to quality education along with already existing policies.
First of all, Schools should prepare students for their future out there in the real world where bookish knowledge is of less importance. People lack practical knowledge , impromptu thinking and ability to think on their feet when required. This is all because of the basic education we grasp from our childhood. Most of the schools all over the world try to impose pressure on students to score good marks in their academic subjects which should opposed because putting a mental pressure deprives the abilities of a young mind.
I think this situation we are facing today is not completely a fault or education system but also of our preceding generation. For example, Parents expect their child to be getting good marks rather than attempting to check with what a child is interested in. This is very common in India as I have seen people pressuring and humiliating there children for not scoring well in academics. even thought they see their child did well in some non-academic activities like dancing , singing , public speaking etc. The society is the main reason we face this problem. Therefore, it is necessary to make people understand the necessity of practical knowledge over theory.
Of Course, nowadays people can apply to a job only if they posses a high qualified education and degrees in a row. Having a academic excellence is necessity I agree but along with it the non academic education is also of great importance to survive. For example , if you are on a boat which is about to drown in a sea , the degrees you have will not rescue you but knowing how to swim will. So the logic is very simple ,the people need to understand that practical knowledge is life saving where as theory knowledge is
to make your life easy and less problematic.
I had my early education in a small town of Karnataka in India where we had minimal access to internet. In my school days I was a very brilliant student with up to the mark in academics. My clear interest were Mathematics and Science. On the other hand my brother was keep in sports especially in basket ball and table tennis. This made him give less attention towards the academics leading to low marks. For my parents it was not acceptable and they always wanted their son to be like their daughter. They didn't even realize that his clear interest lies in sports rather than academics. This is not the story of my house but also the story of most people in countries especially like India.
An academic education is inarguably important which educational organisations have already achieved to an extent. In Japan schools do not conduct any exams till fourth standard which is a very concept they have come up with to help children grow as they want without any external pressure like exams. This is very crucial as well as a innovative step break this stereotype of Education system in our countries.
Finally, I would conclude saying that academics and non-academics are equally important for the balanced growth of the child and somehow non academic knowledge would rescue a person from miserable situation that the academic knowledge. Its important to enlighten people before making the government or educational organisation to take any steps against this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, of course, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 33.0505617978 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 91.0 58.6224719101 155% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3231.0 2235.4752809 145% => OK
No of words: 660.0 442.535393258 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89545454545 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06857624559 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67263766553 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 325.0 215.323595506 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492424242424 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 1029.6 704.065955056 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5964039231 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9090909091 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57575757576 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170163847923 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390152675676 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584381280583 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728937705163 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554106700293 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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