People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
In today's competitive world, every individual has face some risks to achieve their life goals. This rule is applicable to personal as well as professional life in a biased way. Taking risks yields a positive energy in a person and also prepares him to his future endeavour. This statement is not only restricted to life of a individual. It is applicable to as high as between to nations. One must understand that taking risks has its own pros and cons. Hence, before making any such risk taking decisions, people have to make a thorough homework on the adverse effects of it. Our parents make decision for our families. Until certain age we tend to follow their decisions. One wrong step can harm the whole family. Therefore, taking risks should be considered deliberately.
The decision we make will affect our life. But, the risk with such decisions increase when we take a decision on behalf of other people. For example, head of a company, politicians, or anyone who represents a group of people have more risks while taking a decision. His actions will effect not only his life but also on the life of other people. In such situations decisions should be taken in very deliberate way. A person has to analyse every aspects of that action and then execute it.
Nowadays, youth of the nation tend to make decisions without thinking twice. They will have very less patience to understand the future consequences of it and they are less interested in analyzing the same. For example, Some students take very bold decisions like suicide, if they fail in their academic curriculum. This kind of steps are very common nowadays. In countries like India , such suicide accidents have been gradually increased in past years. This clearly shows the attitude of youth today. They tend to make decisions without analyzing the consequences and end up taking such bold steps.
In order to prevent such incidents, people need to change their mentality and must be patient enough to learn work on their risky actions.
Sometimes, executing a risky action becomes inevitable. Due to some constraint like time, we tend take bold decision without second thought. In such situations one should be strong enough to face the consequences. One should be well prepared to learn from the mistake and not to repeat the same mistake again.
Hence, In order to survive in a competitive world, every individual will take risky actions but should be well informed about the effects of the decision especially when the decision taken is risky. In addition to that, even if the execution fails, the person should be bold enough to embrace the adverse effects of that decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...competitive world, every individual has face some risks to achieve their life goals....
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Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a biased way" with adverb for "biased"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...o personal as well as professional life in a biased way. Taking risks yields a positive energy ...
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Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ement is not only restricted to life of a individual. It is applicable to as high...
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Line 1, column 621, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Until” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...parents make decision for our families. Until certain age we tend to follow their dec...
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Line 4, column 284, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ile taking a decision. His actions will effect not only his life but also on the life ...
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Line 6, column 385, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...common nowadays. In countries like India , such suicide accidents have been gradua...
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Line 6, column 602, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nces and end up taking such bold steps. In order to prevent such incidents, peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2217.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94866071429 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58591011375 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479910714286 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1303504003 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.5161290323 118.986275619 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4516129032 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.74193548387 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174845905611 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436926176646 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441872829452 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932005240273 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170131639442 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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