People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
In today's competitive world, every individual has face some risks to achieve their life goals. This rule is applicable to personal as well as professional life in a biased way. Taking risks yields a positive energy in a person and also prepares him to his future endeavour. This statement is not only restricted to life of a individual. It is applicable to as high as between to nations. One must understand that taking risks has its own pros and cons. Hence, before making any such risk taking decisions, people have to make a thorough homework on the adverse effects of it. Our parents make decision for our families. Until certain age we tend to follow their decisions. One wrong step can harm the whole family. Therefore, taking risks should be considered deliberately.
The decision we make will affect our life. But, the risk with such decisions increase when we take a decision on behalf of other people. For example, head of a company, politicians, or anyone who represents a group of people have more risks while taking a decision. His actions will effect not only his life but also on the life of other people. In such situations decisions should be taken in very deliberate way. A person has to analyse every aspects of that action and then execute it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...competitive world, every individual has face some risks to achieve their life goals....
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Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a biased way" with adverb for "biased"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...o personal as well as professional life in a biased way. Taking risks yields a positive energy ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ement is not only restricted to life of a individual. It is applicable to as high...
^
Line 1, column 621, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Until” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...parents make decision for our families. Until certain age we tend to follow their dec...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 284, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ile taking a decision. His actions will effect not only his life but also on the life ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 2235.4752809 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 220.0 442.535393258 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76818181818 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60264884142 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 704.065955056 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6693103688 60.3974514979 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.7058823529 118.986275619 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9411764706 23.4991977007 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121902560572 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038362325338 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445774741273 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102491348756 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119324814575 0.0667264976115 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 14.1392134831 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.