Claim: In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business
matters.
Small Businesses require to take care of numerous conditions while starting up with a business. They require good number of people or employees, suitable location and physical infrastructure and most important is the capital amount. Involving the government in to these small businesses would add up the to do list like policies and time consuming regulations and so on. Hence, keeping the government off the private businesses would surely be beneficial. But , it is also the case that some government regulations and policies
help these small businesses to thrive by increasing consumer confidence in them. They also help in protecting the ethical businesses with the unfair businesses which break the rules.
In United States has the highest rates of entrepreneurship compared to countries like India. Why? Because anyone could start a business anywhere in US unlike most other countries. They would require a very minimal amount to get the business registered with government then they are good to go. Only barriers they face are choosing a suitable location , infrastructure, resources and a good capital. But in countries like India people have to strive hard to get the business established which diminishes the encouragement and enthusiasm in bright minds. Along with so many restrictions even if the entrepreneurs are granted with permissions, the numerous rules and regulations imposed by government policies increase their burden. For instance, some policies may restrict the firing the employees which will be a real burden on small companies which cannot survive with employees not up to the task. And also, they might need to hire separate set of employees to handle the rules, convey it to other employees etc, which could possibly done with one person if there are not many rules.
On the other hand, involving government policies into small businesses can help them to attract more customers. It is glaringly obvious that customers would want to deal with a ethical company and businesses tied up with government are always the obvious first choice. This can also prevent this genuine small businesses from rule breaker and deceiving businesses. In a way, certain industries must be developed under the shelter of government because it is a necessity to put check on the. For example, health care related industries, automobile developers, and cosmetic industries etc. The health care products especially baby cosmetics need to testes rigorously to prevent any threat to public. Multiple testings of the integrity of automobiles is a need in terms of preventing faults in the parts. Taking all such peculiar products in account and for customers safety, some small businesses need to follow government policies. Government policies also provide job security to employees, prevent sexual harassment, racial discrimination and
low breaking.
Involving Government into the small private businesses in countries like India impose some unnecessary and unbiased rules like free employment to lower caste people. On applying such rules in a small companies would stop them from choosing people from wide number. This in a way effects the companies growth because choosing people depending on the caste and not on the intelligence would really weaken there strength
in competing market.
Hence I would like to conclude that involving government into the small businesses is not
a relevant step for the companies growth. Keeping them off the private businesses will protect these small businesses from unnecessary burden of following rules and regulations. But at the same time it is also very important to have government involved with some peculiar industries which might cause harm to society if not guided and observed properly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
Small Businesses require to take care of numerous conditions while start...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sinesses would surely be beneficial. But , it is also the case that some governmen...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...some government regulations and policies help these small businesses to thrive by...
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...as the highest rates of entrepreneurship compared to countries like India. Why? B...
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Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... compared to countries like India. Why? Because anyone could start a business anywhere ...
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...ey face are choosing a suitable location , infrastructure, resources and a good ca...
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Line 4, column 1022, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
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Suggestion: could
...convey it to other employees etc, which could possibly done with one person if there are not m...
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...s that customers would want to deal with a ethical company and businesses tied up...
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Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...cause it is a necessity to put check on the. For example, health care related indust...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...acial discrimination and low breaking. Involving Government into the small priv...
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Line 9, column 241, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...companies would stop them from choosing people from wide number. This in a way effects...
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Line 9, column 292, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
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... wide number. This in a way effects the companies growth because choosing people dependin...
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Line 9, column 326, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...s the companies growth because choosing people depending on the caste and not on the i...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...there strength in competing market. Hence I would like to conclude that involving...
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Line 12, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ernment into the small businesses is not a relevant step for the companies growth...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...nesses is not a relevant step for the companies growth. Keeping them off the private bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, really, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 58.6224719101 152% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3177.0 2235.4752809 142% => OK
No of words: 588.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40306122449 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9242980521 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87750540323 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 215.323595506 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 984.6 704.065955056 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7912692044 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.551724138 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.275862069 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75862068966 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220571850127 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674466674055 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626668230201 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1239761267 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646089590416 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 100.480337079 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.