Schools should cut funding for extracurricular activities such as sports and the arts when school buildings are in need of repair.
The statement is like a two wings of bird, with single wing it is difficult for bird to fly
in free air same condition is mine if I could decide it without any possible expiations.
In the Education system school infrastructure and facilities provided to students helps them to
grow.
First will check funding necessity for extracurricular activities like sports and arts.
To find hidden qualities inside a child 's theoretical as well as practical study plays an equal
importance. For instance, in a class out of 100 students 90 are good at theoretical subject
and the remaining 10 are good at practical subjects like sports and gaining rewards in their
interested sports. If teachers are able to provide a great efforts to upgrade their level then
same students can play for the country in future. either sports make the average child independent
same as other brilliant peer those who are not fan of sports,same is applicable for art.
So as a conclusion extracurricular activities are vital as other subjects.
Secondly school building structure need a regular maintenance to avoid any sudden
uncertainties and can handle natural calamities like fluid or earthquake. Everyone's life
is the upmost priorities for school management including students, teachers and other
co-workers.
Considering both sides school campus, building structure and other activities need equal
wattage at their own fronts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effort'?
Suggestion: effort
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion: Either
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Suggestion: , same
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Message: “So as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n of sports,same is applicable for art. So as a conclusion extracurricular activities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42410714286 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01370368767 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.4932671777 130% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5220802012 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.454545455 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.97078651685 322% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261393721216 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949557043555 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658819999897 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769395398941 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779129234905 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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