Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
In a world where advancing technology seems to becoming more and more auspicious, it might be conceivable to view it as the endpoint to all of society's problems. While science and technology certainly play an important role in solving many difficulties we as a population face, they can never completely solve all of our problems because these problems stem from interpersonal conflicts and emotions rather than quantifiable discrepancies in our lives.
Consider the most prominent issues in our society today - are they related to specific technology-based inconveniences? Or are they rooted deeper in cultural and emotional ways such that science could never begin to truly study and solve them? I would argue the latter. At the end of the day it does not matter if we have the shiniest, newest technologies whizzing about, performing our quotidian tasks for us. If we cannot address issues such as racism, misogyny, and classism, then we as a society will always have problems to face.
Additionally, we are reaching a plateau for new scientific discoveries and technologies. We have had access to a vast bounty of knowledge for such a long time, yet we are nowhere near solving all of the problems in the world. If we have come so far in terms of technology, yet still have such a long way to go as far as societal issues then we can deduce that the two are likely unconnected.
Of course this is not to say that science is utterly useless; we have managed to overcome many trifling issues with the discovery of new technologies. The problem in stating that all of society's problems will be solved with science and technology stems from the fact that everytime a problem is solved, another arises in it's place. Consider the invention of vaccinations as an example. Their invention undoubtedly saved millions of lives, however now there is a movement against them, creating a societal divide - a whole other debate riddled with new problems of it's own.
There will always be problems in society, and quite often the root of the problem will not be a quick fix solveable by technology or science. The two work together to resolve issues, helping us immensely, but to state that they will eventually solve every problem possibly faced would be naiive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 193, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...g time, yet we are nowhere near solving all of the problems in the world. If we have come ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, while, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96062992126 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86908937005 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548556430446 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0536685389 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.125 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154459050618 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547785928642 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453930783946 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967055208286 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403606949102 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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