Human can't live alone, he or she has to live within a society in a manner to enjoy the life. In doing so, a lot of problems could generate. Although science and technologies are helping us to solve some of the problems of society and, I hope, problems solving percentages by the science and technology will increase in future through the advancement of technologies, getting all the solutions of the problems that could stay within society could be elusive.
Science and technologies makes our life easier. Once we could not think that traveling time to USA from Bangladesh would be only 24 hours journey. The invention of airplane by science and technologies has made it possible. Take another example, a mobile phone, a key element of our everyday life, by which we can talk with friends who is not present in our close vicinity. This type of telecommunication was seem impossible in the past and science and technology has made it possible.
From this point, we could think that the only task of science and technologies are to resolve the problems that the humans are facing. In fact, science and technologies has made the impossible into possible although this problems solving approach is generating more and more problems with time. Take for an example of a car or motorcycle which makes our life comfortable through their flexible navigation techniques or the industries that is producing nearly all of our daily commodities. To run a car, motorcycle or industries, the human are burning fossil foils which emits a lot of carbon dioxide- a gas harmful to environment, chloro fluro carbon- a gas harmful to our ozon layer that can protect us from harmful UV rays of sun. Thus, in solving problems, the approach are generating new problems. This cycle would continue as no approach is 100% efficient.
Above all, we can conclude that the solution of present problems will raise new problems and the solutions of that problems will further raise another problems. So, it would not possible to get complete solution of the problems of society via science and technologies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
Human cant live alone, he or she has to live withi...
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Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...nd technologies are helping us to solve some of the problems of society and, I hope, proble...
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Line 2, column 48, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and technologies makes our life easier. Once we could not think that traveling time ...
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Line 2, column 408, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
...ity. This type of telecommunication was seem impossible in the past and science and ...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e the impossible into possible although this problems solving approach is generating...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, as to, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94285714286 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81123692727 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0276639563 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.125 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340283026101 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110445976844 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109995517788 0.0758088955206 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224327550785 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988247890779 0.0667264976115 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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