Scinetists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people

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Scinetists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.

Science has been a key element in history that has helped the humanity to flourish and make improvements. Hence, a majority of people are now living convenient and satisfactory lives without any lack of fulfillment of basic needs. The given prompt contends that scientists and researchers should focus on fields that are more likely to benefit the maximum number of people. However, I mostly disagree with this position for two reasons that will be discussed below. Nevertheless, I do concede that science should be advanced in a direction that may improve the people’s quality of life.
First of all, scientists and researchers should not focus only on fields that are most likely to be advantageous to overall society because they cannot predict whether the research on a specific field would lead to a significant advancement in people’s lives. For instance, atomic physics in the mid-twentieth century was a nascent field of physics, and people did not know what the implication would be by conducting intensive research on this field. However, due to scientists’ endeavor on this field, many countries around the world are now able to utilize atomic energy that enables people to produce considerable amount of electricity. If scientists had only focused on research that would most likely to yield to the most benefit at that time, the world nowadays might have still suffered from a lack of electricity. Since science is full of uncertainty, a field that seems unpromising and unviable to society may actually have the most profound impact on the humanity. Therefore, scientists and researchers should not limit their fields that seems prospective and reliable.
Secondly, besides the unpredictability of scientific research, experts and scientists should not confine themselves to focus on promising areas because scientific fields are thoroughly interconnected. For example, chemistry and biology have been the two scientific fields that have been inseparable. Even though biology seems more likely to result in promising outcomes in research, this cannot be achieved without prior experiments and theorization in chemistry. Specifically, if one needs to understand the mechanism of metabolism in animals, he or she must have knowledge about how the combustive reaction, one of the chemical reactions, proceeds. In contrast, if scientists only focus on biology and neglect conducting research in chemistry, they are unlikely to produce desirable results in biological research. Hence, various areas in science are firmly interwoven with one another and cannot be inspected in isolation. If other fields are studied together, this will produce a synergy to advance overall scientific fields.
Admittedly, focusing research on areas that are prone to benefit the greatest number of people can save substantial amount of cost that may be used in other purposes. For instance, experiments utilizing the CERN, a huge particle accelerator with a radius of 10 kilometers in Switzerland, requires astronomical scale of investment. Due to its prohibitive cost in experiments, residents dwelling near the CERN often suffer from blackout due to the lack of electricity that is used for the experiments. Rather than infringing the residents’ quality of lives, the money that might have been utilized in those experiments can be used to improve the welfare of communities in need. Thus, focusing on research that does not need huge investment can be beneficial to some people.
In conclusion, scientists and researchers should not focus narrowly on fields that are most likely to benefit most people since scientific research is unpredictable and scientific fields are interconnected to each other. However, it is true that scientific research may demand considerable amount of finance to conduct experiments, so it might be a better choice to focus on fields that do not encroach the societal welfare. Scientists and researchers should find a balance between these two positions in order to advance scientific fields and, at the same time, yield the largest benefit to people.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.4196629213 225% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 100.0 58.6224719101 171% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3451.0 2235.4752809 154% => OK
No of words: 637.0 442.535393258 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41758241758 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02382911018 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03488812013 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463108320251 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1069.2 704.065955056 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1809184244 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.730769231 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352115713009 0.243740707755 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104994582772 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111125308266 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211073379512 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383056862181 0.0667264976115 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 164.0 100.480337079 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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