Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
In the course of modern life, political leaders are chosen by all citizens, who believe in certain principles. At first, the expectations out of chosen leaders are to continue the principles and purposes they had before the democratic voting. but humankind is a funny creature, they tend to change their worldview and improve in a better way persistently. While the citizens are changing, they are now expecting their leaders adapting the change and representing the citizens’ improved ideas. Last decades’ social acts such as; protests in Paris, Turkey and Argentina are great proofs to need for compliance between citizens and their leaders. Looking closely to latest events and the rapid improvement in intellectual of humankind, leaders must support the public opinion to serve better to citizens and develop the country.
To begin with, leaders were the ones, who decides for the sake of the people by themselves or with a small group of bourgeois. The belief in that time indicated that citizens are not educated enough to understand the aspects of policies including economics, agriculture, social and military decisions. For instance, the intellectually raised emperors in the ottoman empire decided war and trade policies by the help of the educated consultants in the favor of the illiterate public. For centuries they had thrived and became one of the most successful nations in the history. Later with the invention of the rapid copying papers and developed transportation, books, newspapers and ideas were disseminated easily. The nation started to learn read and write then each one of them became individuals having worldview on the subjects that affect them the most. but the emperor kept the decisions for himself and engendered disloyalty and riots through the people. This was the beginning of the fall of the ottoman empire.
Moreover, we can see a similar but more intense pattern in democratic systems today. The inexorable improvement of humankind causes to regret a leader even though the leader carries the same principles when they were chosen 10 months ago.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... they had before the democratic voting. but humankind is a funny creature, they ten...
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Line 1, column 671, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...zens and their leaders. Looking closely to latest events and the rapid improvement in int...
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Line 5, column 742, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to read'
Suggestion: to read
...ted easily. The nation started to learn read and write then each one of them became ...
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Line 5, column 858, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...the subjects that affect them the most. but the emperor kept the decisions for hims...
^^^
Line 9, column 133, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'regretting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: regretting
...xorable improvement of humankind causes to regret a leader even though the leader carries...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32035928144 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84598910494 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592814371257 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3969816081 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.0625 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083270661603 0.243740707755 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261957185569 0.0831039109588 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232588720449 0.0758088955206 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.046700374205 0.150359130593 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036677655694 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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