Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Every child has some special talent, and by cultivating those special skill sets, he may get profound success in the future. But in reality, most of the talent of a kid fades away due to several reasons, negligence is one of the indispensable factors. As for some kids, it is impossible to figure out, how to nurture the skill or how to develop their talent on their own. The above prompt says that society should identify those children who have special talents and offer training at an early age to develop their talents. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the above prompt for three reasons.
To begin with, talent is useless, if there is no proper way to determine how to channel it in the right direction. In other words, talent is a weapon that one individual has to master by training. If the training is started at an early age, it will be very much helpful for the kid to achieve success in later life. For instance, let a kid is good at playing football but his parents or surrounding people have no idea about how to give him proper training, then, his talent will be lost. If most of the world-famous football players like Leonel Messy did not get proper training at a very early age, then, they may be they will get that much success in later life. This example illustrates how much special training is necessary for proper in later life. Even if, the individual is able to figure out his talent later in life, then it may be too late to pursue the career based on his talent, then, the very special talent will be lost. If society provides support for the kid or guides him properly, then the certain individual will get success in the later life, which may bring prosperity to society.
Furthermore, identifying proper talent is a hectic job, that requires special skills and past experiences. Identifying and giving proper circumstances for nurturing talents is one of the most sensitive job. For instance, if a student likes to play piano but by the societies’ pressure, he chooses the path of education, then, the skill might be lost in the way . He may not do well in education line, then he might end up to have a normal job and society will lost the talent. The above example illustrates that proper training is very pivotal factor in order to identifying and determining which field, an individual is good at. If any individual pursue other career rather which does not require his talent, then he likely to do very hectic work but in the other hand, if he chose to play piano, then he certainly will have the chance to transcend in the music world. So identifying a special talent is very important factor, Otherwise, the main purposes of having talent will be lost.
Of course, some argue that in our increasingly globalised economy competition for jobs has skyrocketed and thus it is imperative that we pursue practical path. However, isn’t that precisely why society should motive and help one individual to nurture his talents? If we do so, societies’ talents likely to come out and our society will improve and proper.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...raining at a very early age, then, they may be they will get that much success in late...
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Suggestion: experiences
...c job, that requires special skills and past experiences. Identifying and giving proper circumst...
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Suggestion: .
...then, the skill might be lost in the way . He may not do well in education line, t...
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Suggestion:
...y not do well in education line, then he might end up to have a normal job and so...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...p to have a normal job and society will lost the talent. The above example illustrat...
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Suggestion: ,
...n important factor. With proper guidance , society should motivate them to pursue ...
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, really, so, then, thus, well, as for, as to, for example, for instance, of course, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3153.0 2235.4752809 141% => OK
No of words: 675.0 442.535393258 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67111111111 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.09713273454 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53294243632 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 294.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435555555556 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 991.8 704.065955056 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.10617977528 354% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3142688361 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.709677419 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7741935484 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45161290323 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 10.2758426966 234% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275015201618 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875539071252 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746880694596 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177380065216 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844719626392 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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