Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
As we all know that truth is still the truth, even if, no one believes it and false is still false even if everyone believes it. That being said, in a present-day where everything is available in hand's reach people seem to forget the value of truth and appreciate more the appealing contents even though sometimes they do it unbeknown. The above sets about in the contemporary world people tend to appreciate the compelling lie over the accepting harsh reality. While, I concede that most people accentuate appealing images, in my opinion, I mostly agree with the above prompt for two reasons.
To begin with, the People often make appealing promises even though they know that they will not keep those promises in the future. For example, in a democratic society, we choose our leader through an election. Most of the politicians make sham promises before the election but when the election is over they never intended to fulfil the promise in the future. People are also to blame. They emphasize people, who makes appealing promises over the one, whose promises are related to reality. In a recent election, a politician made a promise that in his reign smoking marijuana will be legalized in every town and people take it as an attractive initiative without having a second thought about the pernicious effects in the future. The above example illustrates that in recent days, people are often more conspicuous about the good parts of a plan without thinking about the other parts. If people accept the dazzling matter without thinking about the reality will do so at their peril.
Furthermore, the reality is often disappointing. In the present day, because of technological advancement, everything is in our hands reach, and people often lose sight of reality. For instance, people often come to know about many people through social media, such as Instagram, Facebook, etc. Sometimes they came to know about their problem-free life from social media but do not take any afford to know the real truth. They often forget that people over the social media are still normal human beings and they have predicaments in their life too. As no one ever has a problem-free life. They believe everything they see on the social media. Most of the people, especially teenagers want to enjoin the illicit lifestyle and as result fall into a massive depression. If teenagers continue to emphasize the apocryphal lifestyles, without knowing the real truth, then they will be vulnerable to many mental issues.
However, sometimes reality is often too harsh for the people. In that case, exposing reality may not be a good idea. For example, in 2019 corona outbreak killed over 1 million people in India but the government kept the death toll hidden from the public. Many news channels propagated that the condition was under control and the number of death were 500000 to reduce panic among the people. The above example illustrates that sometimes people have to lie in order to reduce the damage. If people had come to know the real situation, they might have panicked and took things into their own hands, which might worsen the situation.
Despite these reasons, the truth will always prevail no matter how harsh it is and we have to accept the harsh reality in order to grow and prosper. Though accepting an appealing image is sometimes less pernicious but the advantages are overshadowed by the potential disadvantages which are more severe. So accepting compelling lies is not advisable rather accepting harsh reality and facing reality undauntedly is more needed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ey have predicaments in their life too. As no one ever has a problem-free life. Th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2981.0 2235.4752809 133% => OK
No of words: 595.0 442.535393258 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01008403361 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93888872473 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5744936969 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 215.323595506 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468907563025 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 947.7 704.065955056 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2296682037 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3666666667 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.08892379625 0.243740707755 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262626948485 0.0831039109588 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347591278839 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621098312328 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434653426621 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.