Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Since that had the industrial revolution, the Erth ecossistems changed, and this inderectly relate with ecology of animals and plants. So that, have been encreasing the number os extintion in the Erth, therefore I don’t agree with the argument that we only have make efforts to save endagered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activites.
First, all ecossistems in the Erth are connected, and when we make somethng in a place indirectly can afect other place. For exemple, there are a lot of problems in the sea. In this year I saw in a newspaper a news of a Asia coutry that was taking plast on the sea. This actude are intals much problems on the water ecossistem. The result of this actude was showed by a video that make a big repercution uin the internt. The video show the quantitie of plast on the see, and told about the species that eat the plast bag thinking that is algae and daid.
We need preserve the Erth, becauser it is the place that we live. Actualy, we human are changin a lot the landscape of the world. One place that have win a big attention is the Amanzon rain forest. Since last decade this forest have been abruptly extration of animals and plants, a mean five hous are destruided all hour. Ecologists of one universty of Brazil said that this actude can cause much extintion of plants and animal and cause problems in ecologio of other coutry. Sice have many birds that fly for other emispher during the year, and if these birds don’t fly for other cautry can make a eecological desequiliber causing extion of other expecies.
One of most comented problem causing for the human are the warming global. These problem is relate with human since the evolution of the tecnology. The maijor problem is the polar area that are finhing. The area othe the ice that penguin, polar bear and other polars animal had decrease abruptly, and there are less work to decrease this process caused by human.
In conclusion, I think that we have preserve all speceis independently if they are relate with us or not. Since we caused many extinction on the world and are entaling until now.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
... sea. In this year I saw in a newspaper a news of a Asia coutry that was taking plast ...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...his year I saw in a newspaper a news of a Asia coutry that was taking plast on th...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...last on the sea. This actude are intals much problems on the water ecossistem. The r...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'won'.
Suggestion: won
...scape of the world. One place that have win a big attention is the Amanzon rain for...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... extration of animals and plants, a mean five hous are destruided all hour. Ecolo...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...blems in ecologio of other coutry. Sice have many birds that fly for other emispher ...
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Line 5, column 604, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...on't fly for other cautry can make a eecological desequiliber causing extion...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...extion of other expecies. One of most comented problem causing for the human a...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'These problems'?
Suggestion: This problem; These problems
...g for the human are the warming global. These problem is relate with human since the evolutio...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'related'.
Suggestion: related
...re the warming global. These problem is relate with human since the evolution of the t...
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Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the the ice that penguin, polar bear and other polars animal had decrease abruptl...
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Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'preserved'.
Suggestion: preserved
... In conclusion, I think that we have preserve all speceis independently if they are r...
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Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'related'.
Suggestion: related
...e all speceis independently if they are relate with us or not. Since we caused many ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68766404199 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45149134149 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482939632546 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8885055784 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113064245067 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320864966412 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520118928316 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069622837876 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622683372028 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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