Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Leadership is one of the crucial and important quality in any person. Nobody has ever born with leadership qualities but rather needed to be developed. The prompt suggests that cooperation instead of competition is required to develop leadership qualities. I believe, cooperation and competition are not mutualy exclusive and both play a significant role in developing leadership qualities. I will elucidate my position using the following three main reasons.
To begin up, every leader needs to have cooperation quality. Without cooperation, no leader has ever been able to get mass people support. Team work is really necessary in every leadership role because the main job of every leader is not to actually do the job but to supervise and guide others. For instance, if an individual does not have capabilities to work with other people, and instead prefers to work alone; he or she will never listen to other people ideas and will not be able to work with them. Therefore, cooperation is a crucial quality must for every leader.
Secondly, competition helps an individual to get best out of every person. No man or woman has ever been able to climb without facing tough competition from his or her peers. Sense of competition makes an individual to work on his or her weaknesses and promote moral upliftment that both are vital qualities of leadership. Let's take an example of Rahul Gandhi;he belongs to the Gandhi family who has hegemony in Indian Politics for the last 60 years. It is not immature to assume that he has not faced any difficulties in his childhood and probably dreamt to become prime minister one day. But when he entered in the election in 2014, he faced tough competition from his opposition party, BJP and lost drastically. Due to this intense competiton, from 2014-present, people has observed drastic changes in his leadership qualities and even people are starting to support him as well. Therefore, competition plays a very important role in developing leadership qualities in any field.
However, someone can argue that intense competition leads to various immoral activities like in politics: gerrymendering, fake news, and corruption. I agree that competition does create several serious problems but instead of elimiting competition, we should start looking into solving these problems.
To sum up, cooperation and competition are both vital qualities of a leader. No man or women has ever been able to become leader without facing enough competition and without cooperation from other people. Competion does create new problems but we should start looking into solving them instead of rejecting it outright.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2227.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 428.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20327102804 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88697605701 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502336448598 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.504903574 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8260869565 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6086956522 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52173913043 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207981659052 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579704386075 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569393055405 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115343595413 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785477374847 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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