Some people believe the corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Corporations are not sole entities but amalgamation of people working in various sectors whose decisions not only affect the target demographic but also a large amount of people out of that scope. It would be rather presumptuous to assume that the only responsibility of a corporation would be to acquire as much money as possible. I mostly agree with the first stance in the prompt due to following reasons.
For a corporation to be successful it has to depend on a multitude of factors which include humans, machines, and resources. This has a direct effect upon the society where the corporation has been established. For instance, a huge clothing retailer opens shop in a city. The residents will take a look and if found to their liking, will buy their products contributing to the profits that this company makes. As this gains traction, people's sense of aeshetic will start to shift based on what products are being promoted by such a reputable store. If it promotes body hugging type of clothes then it is sure to exacerbate the feelings of people who are already insecure. Thereby having a discernible effect on that society's well being.
The effects a corporation has on the environment is conspicuous. For example if the waste generated is not disposed of properly, it will lead to the contamination of the nearby natural resources. And the more acquisitive a corparation is the harder it will become to put an end to such malpractices as they will have leverage over the situation. We know that legal processes take due time, it will become harder to tackle the problem and find a viable solution. The resources will constantly be depleted in the meantime just to aggrandize the aforementioned corporation.
The corporations only goal should not be to acquire as much money as possible as that goal is exploitative in nature. It only makes the rich man richer and the poor man poorer. We see this happen all the time when big corporations who make millions in profit only do so because they have sweatshops set up around the world. Their excess of wealth relies on underpaid workers. These workers live in debilitating conditions for long hours at a stretch which is not moral or ethical.
I would like to conclude by saying that corporations have a responsibility to the people that they are profiting off of. Money making should be one of their goals while keeping in mind how their actions impact the society around them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 549, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing promoted by such a reputable store. If it promotes body hugging type of clothe...
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Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding society'?
Suggestion: the surrounding society
...eeping in mind how their actions impact the society around them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85851318945 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87617465684 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556354916067 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6493772621 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.0909090909 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9545454545 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77272727273 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272610162215 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723078462495 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659046111136 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150459024221 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452939965737 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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