Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate.
Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The belief that the responsibility of corporations is to make as much money as possible while operating within the law is justified as it is correct for them to believe in increasing their productivity and turnover. But, I do not completely support the thought attached to it that it is the whole and sole responsibility of these corporations.
Contributing towards the environment and our society in which we live comes as a moral duty to each and every person. This help can be at a very small scale or a large level depending upon its people's abilities. So, the corporations can sure take it as a responsibility to promote well-being of the society and environment and they can choose the level of its cooperation to the same. Apart from minting and hoarding money, a little chunk can be used to take care of the surroundings and its people.
Imagine a corporation running at a place situated in the midst of bad roads, stinky gutters, hell lot of pollution and irritable people disgusted with the condition of their vicinity. Imagine another scenarion where this corporation runs in the midst of beautiful gardens, proper roads, healthy and happy people praising and giving good wishes to the corporation. Which picture seems to be better? Obviously the second one. A positive atmosphere and cheerful people around would help the corporation to grow and prosper more not only in terms of money but in terms of respect from its people also.
Hence, although it is the responsibility of a corporation to work hard and stack money, at the same time it would not be bad for it to provide assistance in the well being of the society and environment. Sharing of responsibility in this way and understanding our moral duties would help to make this world a better place to live.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 593, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...but in terms of respect from its people also. Hence, although it is the responsib...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, so, well, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 306.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96164446667 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532679738562 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6815374562 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.769230769 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321006145887 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949463500672 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075515651229 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175304072691 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047067888971 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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