Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate.
Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Corporations are the essential part of any country and their fundamental principle is to earn money. Besides, the company only working for society without seeking profit is hard to survive. Corporations are of two types- public and private. Public corporations work for society, for example in India,we have BSNL, SAIL (Steel authority of India), ONGC, and Air India. And private corporations are the businesses establishment born to satisfy the urge of founders and their investors for the money, for example, Reliance, Birla, Godrej and the like. All of the public corporations mentioned above are near to their closer. Since, all of these companies working as the sole responsibility towards the society and accounting for huge losses by not even earning the needful money. From the above example, we can easily understand the role of money in the corporate sector.
The private corporations are made to pitch money and attract investors to invest money. This money is invested on those items which will give a good return in response, not on the items from where the yield is zero or negative in number. These companies mostly work for their benefit not for the society. However, company care for people only due to its own interests, it can be a case, when society is providing with four factors of production, such as labor, land, capital and consumers to the company, then in reciprocity company takes care for the development and welfare of those people living in that area. Providing them with good housing facilities, insurance facility, advanced machines, good offers for investment and institutions like schools and colleges to develop skilled labor. Hence, company invests into the long term profit for itself, together with providing benefits to the people.
Furthermore, the corporations filling its legal documents adhere to follow them in good faith. But, what if, the company cheats on the government or the citizens. While, in that case, the government and the people needs to be vigilant and need to become the watchdog to save their assets(labor, land, capital) from any kind of theft and danger such as the corporate frauds, for example, frauds done by Sahara or Nirav Modi.
As well as, expecting “SAVE ENVIRONMENT” from these companies will be a massive foolishness and a huge mistake in understanding their role and their principle, which is to earn money at every cost. Again the point arises about them, that their benefit lies first. Hence, if they found some profit in it then only, they will work upon it. Otherwise, they work under the legal obligations. But, they don’t perform anything as their responsibility towards society and environment. Besides, if companies like Pepsico, Coca-Cola, Kurkure and the others, start campaign in response to save environment, against plastic bottles or the polythene (wrapper or covers) then, they will do their own harm which surely they don’t want to do. As, all of their products usually sold in plastic containers.
Despite all the given facts, the corporations are an important part of the country, providing boost to its economy. Basically, they work for their profit, while for society and environment they work in case of their obscure interest. Still, the power lies with the people and the government to manipulate it in the best way possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...s work for society, for example in India,we have BSNL, SAIL Steel authority of Indi...
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Line 1, column 400, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'businesses'' or 'business's'?
Suggestion: businesses'; business's
...India. And private corporations are the businesses establishment born to satisfy the urge ...
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Line 1, column 548, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
..., Reliance, Birla, Godrej and the like. All of the public corporations mentioned above are...
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Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rporate frauds, for example, frauds done by Sahara or Nirav Modi. As well as, ...
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Line 7, column 747, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hich surely they don't want to do. As, all of their products usually sold in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, then, well, while, for example, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2812.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 543.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17863720074 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73933252748 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510128913444 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 877.5 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7279553668 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.148148148 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.62962962963 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176708867274 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502603388539 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042780920578 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10407684246 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458268642994 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 100.480337079 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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