Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The author's says that some people believe government funding of arts is necessary to ensure that arts flourish and can be available to all people while others believe that governement funding of arts threatens the integrity of arts.I think i agree more with the former prompt for a couple of reasons. First for example the handicraft arts in Kashmir in my country is still restricted to the same state since government hasn't ever funded the same ever. Since only some people with wealth enough to keep this priceless skill alive have been able to manage to continue following the same line but the art has been restricted to this small group of people. Secondly the roots of arts like say the art of making sarees from banana leaves that is native to another region in India down south are confined to those areas itself, need of governement funding to make this arts available to all is essential.Lets dive deep into these examples ahead.
So as a first the handicraft arts in Kashmir like those of shawl making its been confined to a very small group of people who had the knowledge and the money to keep pursuing the same is still restricted within those regions. People still travel from all around the world including India as well to buy those shawls in Kashmir. I strongly believe if this art is not to die soon, government funding is a must to these regions as then the people from these areas can show the art to the world and maybe this can be taught to people belonging to different regions of the country as well.
Also the Saree making art from banana leaves down south of India even though its not a dying art but it is strictly reserved to those regions of the country. Here the people need the government funding really badly to make the art available to other regions of the country and hence pass on the same to a wider variety of people as a whole.There's no other way those people could reach a wider audience of both people who want to learn the art but also those who would cherish seeing and experiencing it.
Moreover there might be people who would say that the government funding would threaten the integrity of the art what this specifically means is it would lead to dilation or impurities in the native or original art form. But I still say that it wouldn't do any harm history is replete with examples of modifications and enhancements to art forms such as Matisse who learnt from and modified a lot of art forms by Picasso and the world still remembers Picasso's original works as they were the original masterpieces that lead to such evolution in today's modern day art.
In conclusion I would say that the author's prompt that government funding is required for arts to flourish and be available to all is quite convincing given the examples that I sited and the alernate prompt that it would threaten the integrity of arts is not so much true as it only leads to evolution of the arts making it even more so desirable that it in turn flourish and is available to all in the modern world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2493.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 544.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58272058824 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40220079021 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409926470588 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 23.0359550562 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.6533119642 60.3974514979 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 207.75 118.986275619 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.3333333333 23.4991977007 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.21951772744 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490056650244 0.243740707755 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210420446708 0.0831039109588 253% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163406095038 0.0758088955206 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298066649279 0.150359130593 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112525650042 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 14.1392134831 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 11.2143820225 178% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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